THIS IS FECKING FANTASTIC. i am wholly impressed, and loving this. great job, it's so in character and realistic! :D

Awesome; one word to describe it :)

It's a really good story, one of the only enjoyable Static Shock fics I've read so far. You did such a great job of writing how Jimmy would feel after 'the incident' and seeing Richie, very believable. I could really understand how he was feeling.

I'm glad they finally confronted each other. It’s good that Jimmy knows Richie’s alright and doesn’t hate him for what happened, it gave him the release he needed. It was a sad scene, but also a happy ending as they can move on now. I'm glad there was some humor though, like the cafeteria, it lightened things up a bit :D

This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. You did a really good job with Jimmy's obsessive feelings. I really liked this a lot.

I've been looking for a good Static Shock fanfic that would be worth my time to read and this one is definately worth my time to read. I'm gonna' probably be reading it again sometime just to read it.

The cafeteria scene with Richie and the milk was actually a good part. I liked that part and I was cheering for Richie when he covered the tator tot up with his milk carton. That was really thoughtful and a good little twist.

Awesome story and keep up the great work!

-Taylor

great job liked the ending thank god Jimmy didnt shot Richie i really liked it, nice job

great!

Great job! I love it!

Wow, this was brilliant. I was looking for a good Static fic to read, and I found an amazing one. I've never actually seen this particular episode, but I still love this story. I think it's perfect. You have a lot of talent. I bow before your writing genius.

Wow. I think you got Jimmy's mind set down. I was on the edge of my seat towards the end, I thought he was going to shoot Richie again.

I love Jimmy fics. And this one is majorly good

A very interesting story. Very enjoyable! I hope you continue to write.

*.* Wow this was one of the best Static Shock fics I've read on this site! ^^ Keep up the good work!

This was a quite good story. It's very different from the stories we usually see here, and it's just plain well-written. It had me guessing all the way through, trying to figure out what Jimmy would do next. I think you nailed his obsessive personality. I also like that Richie was obviously scared and nervous when Jimmy confronted him, but he kept his cool. The ending was just icing on the cake. This fic really impressed me.

Interesting. I must confess that I skipped some of the fantabulous exposition at the beginning of the story, but it was good. I quite enjoyed the ending.

WOW! You did a DAMN good job! You brought out Jimmy's obsession and mental torture to a well deserved angsty ramble that made this story work! Awesome job...though I had a problem with the fact that you write damn good... damn it.