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Jordan
2007-11-01
ch 5, anon.
abuseWow, you fic is quite good. The first chapter was the most engaging Andrew/Justin chapter I've ever read. You've got skills...just wish you'd update. I know you probably won't, I mean it's been over a year, but if you have given up on it, think about writing just one more chapter to tie up Justin's and Andrew's relationship. It'd make your readers happy ^_^
righty
2007-07-05
ch 6, anon.
abuseOK

I hate it, because I love it. You didn´t updated since march 2006, what means, You´ll never finisch it. so I ask will You? I hope so, but I´m also prepared for a silent no.
Lisa
2006-07-22
ch 6, anon.
abuseA really great story! Please update!!
hennahito-ckbc
2006-06-04
ch 6,
abuseYour fic is funny and cute. xD Hope to see more soon~~!
andrewhot
2006-05-18
ch 6,
abusenice chapter, just so you know i'm your fan and i hope you update new chapter soon.
smithyfan
2006-04-26
ch 6,
abuseThanks so much for the review!! I love this fic its really good. I like the psychiatrists notes. You really bring out the characters well especially gabbie. One thing is it not spelt Van De Kamp not Der?? I'm not sure but I think it is, not that it actually matters!! Other than that this is a really really good fic. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon x
fluffy the adventure squirr...
2006-04-21
ch 6,
abusethis is a really great story...seriously, you are so good! The characterization is near on perfect, especially Gabrielle you wrote her really well. The way you balance the dramna and humour is impressive, its amazing how people can do that, just like the actual show...
And I love RJ. what a wanker! ahh, we've all got friends like RJ...
Dont suppose you could read my fic? its only a short piece...not half as good as this, but het, im attention starved
RuByMoOn17
2006-03-19
ch 6,
abusemore!
imakeeper
2006-03-17
ch 6,
abuseJustin nodded. "Go on. You're the one who's doing her. See, this is why I don't like women."

lol

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imakeeper
2006-03-17
ch 5,
abusewow
imakeeper
2006-03-17
ch 4,
abusewow...that was funny at the end
imakeeper
2006-03-17
ch 3,
abusenice!
imakeeper
2006-03-17
ch 2,
abusewow
imakeeper
2006-03-17
ch 1,
abusewow!
Judith.C
2006-03-17
ch 6, anon.
abuseImagine my finish delight when I see my name on the page! It does not matter that I am being likened to your mother (or mine, actually) I am mentioned!
Okay, your want evidence of my overjoyed-ness-ness with this story? You want gushing? You GOT gushing! *Takes deep breath*
Okay, what I like about this story:
1. The characters. There is none of this 'Justin and Andrew lurv each other and nothing can get in their way!' I don’t know if that is common in J/A stories, but it is true enough in other fandoms, so kudos to you for keeping them true to their selves
2. Having a plot OUTSIDE of the relationship. *Gasp!* you mean this isn’t all about crazy-wild gay sex?! Don’t get me wrong, I enjoy PWP a whole lot, but that this story involves family AND friends, and that they aren’t all mindless drones that look on approvingly as the guy gets his prince riding on a shining lawn mower.
3. That they aren’t all monogamous. They are teenagers that are pissy and jealous. They aren’t going to pine! Andrew is a dick, he isn’t going to let it lay (*sniggers at joke, then looks very depressed*)
4. That the shrink is an angry-man. Me and him are feelin' the love...and the lack of sleep finally appears in writing form!
Anyway, in order to show that I come in peace, holding the breadstick of truce (sleep' my rotting brain cries over the fannish giggles 'sleep!') and requesting just a small (itty-bitty!) A/J moment in the next chapter.
Thank you for a story well done…now…WRITE!
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