O, I love this

wow. very deep. i love how you read into sara's mind

Wow. It literally sent chills down my back. It's so hard-core mean, yet so soft. You really have been able to capture Sara so amazingly well.

Hey, this is a great short story. It really captures the intensity of Sara's feelings and how the crimes take their toll.

Great job.

oh wow. few fics measure out like this one. it is truely great. i love how you incorperated the analygy to it. i hope you continue this fic.

heartbreakingly good

keep it up

sassy

Good fic. I like how you got into Sara's head.

Jackie