GOD U NEED TO UPDATE MORE OFTEN! IVE READ THE STORY A MILLION TIMZ AND ITS ALWAYZ ON 14! but it still goz on ma favs

PLEASE WRITE MORE! I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS STORY SINCE YOU FIRST PUT IT UP FOR THE FIRST TIME! PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU WRITE MORE!

I DONT CARE WHAT FUCKING SHIT U COME UP WITH IN UR DAMN MIND, JUST GET ODD BACK TO KADIC AND BACK WITH CALI U SLUT! AND BELIEVE ME!I KNOW EVERY SINGLE CURSE WORD!I COULD HAVE SAID MORE!AND IF THIS IS A FLAME, GODDAMN ME!I DONT HAVE A FUCKING IDEA WAT A FLAME IS!

I was reading your story at the factory and decided to read it from FanFiction instead.

Sad. But cool. Sorry it took me so long to review, but...I kinda haven't checked my e-mail in a couple months. More than a hundred e-mails there when I finally checked. Yikes. I know.

I'm officially babbling now, so I'll go. But update soon! Please...

Yeah, like I have any right to ask...

Uh, babbling, I know.

Bye!

wow! i was a sad when odd told evryone that he was leaving. i mean everything was going good. and when he and cali broke up. but i hope that when cali goes to the scholastic decathalon she sees odd. well...

froelicher schriben (happy writings)

sugarplumunchkin

great job! seriously loved it. and i loved Cali and Jer going all RAWR with each other. it truely shows what theyre going through and how much its affecting them. great job.

Rena

oh come on you havent posted a chapter in ages and these chapters last ages what are you talking about short stop being down on yourself

all around good work you seem to get very into the "Soul" of there characters. odd changing from a jester to a lover is actually believeable too it all seems realistic

besides lyoko and the supercomputer but thats just an added twist in the story

nice...hope you don't leave it at that...but good chapie

Hey kittypoo lol! i still love it and am keeping up with it.(the story in case u didn't know,but i never miss anything)except one thing u may need to fix in this ch(13 lol) in the 29th paragraph thingys your missing a quotation mark when it says miss jeen. just wanting to let u know(and i'm paying back for all the times u corrected me,i'll never forget)well lovethe story and love u bibi

PLEASE update soon

oh no! my fave couple is breaking up? at least odd gets a good family.

i hate seeing this chain reaction happen, it should. but who knows, maybe something will happen and odd will remain there?

::cant decide whether to 'squee' or cry:: aww. such a good chappie! update soon!

Rena

OMG been FOREVER since this thing was updated!

Jeremie has a good point at the end. Kinda sad Ulrich had no idea what the heck he was talking about. Well, depression ish me. [

Raymanly73

Uh oh...a chain reaction? This could turn out badly.

I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Meanwhile, keep up the great work and update soon!