cute story! really cute!! Nice job!

a very interesting plot ... I liked it very much ... bravo!

love the story could use an epiloge though.

This story was really great. The plot had some originality to it, the grammer good, and all in all it was a very enjoyable read.
Hope to read more from you in the future.

I love it. It is a great story.

The three-some Draconian thing was an interesting twist. I really like how you approached it, although I was like "What?" when the spider part came. Great story :-)

I LOVE you! This has got to be one of - if not THE - best story that I have read on this site so far! I never once lost interest, you had me hooked from the beginning (hell I couldn't put my laptop down! Not even my friends or family could drag me away from this story!), and not once did I get confused (and it is pathetically easy to confuse me, so trust me when I say that is quite a feat). It flows together pretty smoothly (no out-of-place scenes or random confuzzlers that don't belong). The plot is most definitely original (but not overdone or completely I'm-on-crack ridonkulous), well-thought out (you actually took the time to explain things), and made sense. There are dragons, and it features my favorite pairing (Lucius x Harry) with the added bonus of Voldemort! The challenge scene btw was simply fantastic and uber-hot. I just love you so much! You managed to include the just as intriguing circle of Hermione/Draco/Snape (first time I've seen that threesome) without letting them overshadow the main circle (I say circle cuz I'm not sure what else to call it - threesome sounds tawdry so I don't like to use it to describe relationships where there is actual caring involved. I would call it a menage a trois but I'm never sure if I'm spelling it right). You didn't give Voldemort or Lucius an easy out for what they had done (see, I hate excuses - they are like **, everybody has one). They admitted that they were in the wrong, but refused to apologize for the past (a lot of authors just take the easy way out and make it so they were never involved, cuz ya know, whoever heard of a gray area). The spiders were simply fascinating, and I just love their babies! Five all at once though - holy crap. Have I mentioned that I love you? I feel the need to give you a hug...and a cookie. *shoves a cookie in your mouth and uses your distraction to give you a big hug* YAY! :D Thank you so much for sharing this story. I'm not sure if you could tell by the more than two thousand characters I've used to ramble on with in this review but I really, truly delighted in reading it (trust me if I didn't like it I wouldn't have bothered). You are a very talented author. I'm still wriggling with joy! It's been awhile since I've gotten so much enjoyment out of one story. Thank you again, I will most definitely be re-reading this in the future.

Brillant. Super. Amazing. Fantastic. Cute. Sweet. Love it. Great Story. Well Done.

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i'd juz like to ask why ron wasn't further mentioned or in any way shown to have a reunion when harry and hermione came back from their 'traumatizing' kidnapping. i mean, apart from this first chapter where he was mentioned to have been in the loo when they were caught by filch, i don't think you mentioned him again in the later chapters.. i was juz curious, coz u didn't say if they had a falling out or a reason why ron had suddenly stopped being their other best friend.

great fic, this is my second time reading and i can't believe i juz noticed this now! >.<

good story! everything seems to happen to poor harry doesnt it? i would have cracked after finding out that i was bound to my parents killer and his right hand man, not to mention the assaination attempts.

Very good stoy but what ever happened to Ron?

This story was really good. And it made sense I never felt confuse you didn't make the fic way complicated. You did pretty good on the action I didn't feel bored in middle of the story. So overall I think you did a good job.

Spiders = freaking cool. I love it! :)

You saved the spiders! *loves you* ^_^

oh, what a beautiful story! will there be a sequil? you are such a talented writer that i am looking forward to reading some more of your stories! keep up the good work ne? ^_^