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| Elliesmeow 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI thought was really good for such a short piece. -Ellie |
| oval 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseMan, do you write the characters well. That was perfect! I'm so glad you went into Grissom and Sara's relationship to show why she was finally giving up on him. And that it was Warrick at her door (not that I was expecting anyone else, obviously). It definitely gave a sweet sense of hope after all the angst. Loved it! =] |
| Alice in June 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI loved this piece. I love how you managed to maintain tis bittersweet tone and how you brought the hourglass into the story (very significant and symbolic). I rejoiced when Warrick came in and I couldn't help but think that this is what should have happened in the fifth season. Excellent job, lemonjelly :)! |
| Caroline 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was a lovely W/S story! Very angsty and yet very hopeful for the future! Hope to read some more W/S stuff from you soon :D |
| FanficAddiction 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseNot really a WS shipper, but I did thoroughly enjoy that. Anything that has to do with the death of GSR makes me happy. Thanks for writing this! Keep up the great work. |
| JennCorinthos 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI have read this 5 times and I everytime I do I hope you continue with this premise I want to see what happens how does Warrick help her how do they find love so many questions unanswered. You are a fantastic writer. JENNIFER WARRICK/SARA SHIPPER |
| Review1234 2005-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseGod, I love Sara angst. I'm not a huge Sara fan, but she's just the perfect character for angst. And song parodies; it's just one of the demons I have, but I think they're pretty funny, although, that might be because I'm not a huge Sara fan. Hey, now I want to write an angst story. You are a wonderful influence; and, the story was a wonderful story. I guess the quality of your writing matches the quality of your personality. Ah, well, I'm wired right now, because, the aforementioned Green Tea is taking affect. My eyes feel like they're about to pop out of my head. Anyway, great story, stories, I should say, and I thank you for writing! Man, you're going to have quite a few e-mails in your box tomorrow, seeing as I'm trying to catch up on all of the stories. I'm going to have fun tonight! |
| icklebitodd 2005-07-27 ch 1, | abusevery clever hmm very clever yes. super warrick yer. im liking this as you've probably guessed i like how you work the two in your stand alones |
| Joyce3 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. Very good! You deserve some muffins for this story, if I knew how to bake them...But all kidding aside, this rocked, I enjoyed it very much. |
| nick55 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseOh yeah keep writing. I love it. Update soon. |
| Megara1 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseHi !! So fantastic story !! You did another excellent job with an Warrick/Sara story !! The small peek in Grissom/Sara's past was very very good, even if you aren't a GSR fan !! And I really love how Warrick is, so sweet !! Great, great job, but is it the end ? Megara1 |
| Lissa88 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abuseYou know I was never against Sara/Warrick but I was never very much for it either. Reading some of your stories is turning me into a SW shipper! haha |
| Kelly 2005-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! I hope this isn't the end! |
| csi-sam-sanders 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abusei like this story...aint warrick such a sweetie |