Reviews for SMSS:Ch1:Terror Strikes! Moon's Power Revoked!

2006-07-05 ch 1, anon.	abusevery nice story, you should continue it
VyseLegend 2005-07-12 ch 1,	abuseNot bad! Although Rei's english name is Raye, there are no mistakes. I like the detail in the story. Keep it up!
Armageddon Angel 2005-07-12 ch 1,	abuseI like it. Don't be so harsh on yourself. However, Amy seems out of character. She is not one to scream and she seems a bit selfish. She is someone who would forgive if that person was sincere. Also, Zoisite seemed to come out of nowhere, with little explanation of where she/he came from. That's okay for now but keep dropping hints about her/him and the master. One last thing. You did not close your quotation marks. You worte "Stay out of my shouts ... I'll assume that you meant "Stay out of my way." Other than that, all of the characters keep to the anime. I like it so don't you dare stop it.
Jet-LunarSkye 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abuse(Hmm, guess my story wasn't much of a success...)