ahahah that was great
Awesome job

What a funny little story :D
Great.

OH.
MY.
GOD.
I just woke my husband from a sound sleep laughing.
"With a bellow like a cow in heat" is where I lost it completely.
OMG.

Yeah, this reminds me of the hyper Inuyasha from SLSP. Pretty funny in the end, and amazingly ridiculous throughout. I can't deny that it was creative. I think the last line is the best, just because it's so true...If only he remembered. But then again, if he did, he'd probably just deny the memory in shame. Or, perversely, try to get them back for seeing him like that in the first place by subjecting them to the flower and its wiles...That would be quite an interesting continuation...Nah, it's unnecessary. This is funny enough on its own.

Lol this reminds me of working in the two year old room at perschool! some of those kids are perty strong and there are several who do things like you described Inu doing. It was kind of refressing to reads a comedy about it. ^^ shakes head poor Inu he wanted a song. evil human's for not singing. The story thing is so true even if its a book the child requests and then leaves some times I'm so into reading the story I fail to knotice all the children grabed toys long ago (sence they staied in the same spot) lol ty for shairing

I UNDERSTAND YOU!I get hyper-active sugar buzzes too! But that probably has something to do with the fact that I put sugar in my milk sometimes and that I drink milk more often than I do water or juice combined.

I love this story! It is so funny!

This was very funny. I liked it a lot.

That was so funny, lmfao, anyway it was a great story and I htink Inuyasha sounded quite cute, but I still can't see him giggling...nope still can't, anyway keep up the good work. :)

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Yay! Fun stuff! Inuyahsa high seems like it would be all sorts of fun. Awsome story! BYE!

LK

hey E whats up?

anyway... yeah defenitly sugar high did this to ya, and if I know you well enough(and I do) their was more than just pop involved with this... insane... but hillarious story. So outta 10 id give this an 8, could have been better knowing you, but still good.

(and yes I know I can't spell... so dont remind me if I spelt anything in this review wrong)

Well what happens when you read this after eating three giant pixie sticks, drinking a 2L of pop to yourself, and too much chips a popcorn, while with your weird best friend?

I was rolling on my floor before I even got half way through the story, and was in a fit of laughter for about fifteen minutes. My friend thought I was gonna die since I couldn't breathe...-_-'

So in other words, this is pretty darn funny, and my stomach really hurts from laughing a little TOO much..i wonder why I never read this before?..Hmm..

Awesome story, your my hero Sky! XD

~Itachida

Oh my gosh! I'm laughing my head off right now! Inuyasha was acting like...like...like my editor when she's on soda! LMAO!

To sum it all up in one word...
"Fuzzy."

Regards,
Seiren

that was really funny!you should write more humor stories!