This is an incredible story and it's clearly setup to get even more interesting, so I hope you finish it!

i love this story! plz update it!
coolcari

It's been a while since I've read a good story. First off I'd like to say how I love all the references. It's also cool how you were able to connect the comics with the show. Undeniably hard to bypass that Slade-Deathstroke thing. Also pleased you managed to include Joey in here as some form of conscience when he's really inside- then again won't say more for people who haven't read the comics and bother checking the reviews. Introducing Rose to the Sloppy Joes along with junk food...welcome to America. Finally that last part with the eavesdropping. It was nice.

Donna! yay! I loved her cameo. Your story is really good.

ooh, this is gonna be interesting. I was wondering if someone made another story with this girl besides me.

This story is total...AWESOMENSS!! Everyone is character and the detail is wonderful! Your last update was about six moths ago so I'm kind of late, but I wanted to review anyway! This story is very good and hopefully you could update sometime soon, but no rush, when your ready right? But, this story is good (as you already know), and I hope you can bring Joseph/Jericho in soon, I have a special...fondness for him. =D
Please continue with this story! ^.^
~Love and Peace

Lovely story, do please bring in another chapter soon. I'll be waiting patiently for it.

OH I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! I'm totally faving this! Please continue this soon.

This is the only chapter for which I haven't already submitted two reviews (logged in and out). The day that I see "Chapters: 6" underneath the summary I will cry. I understand that some of you people have things called "lives." I start high school next fall, so I get that. But, everyone likes updates. June twenty-fifth is the half-a-year mark since you put in chapter five. I hope that you'll update this and, at some point, complete the story.

This is an excellent fic! I can't wait to see what you post next, and I espsecially can't wait for Joey to make an appearance! C'mon, the girl deserves to meet her older brother!

this is a really good story! please update soon!

I'm gonna cry. Where are you? (I understand that you said you'd do this on YOUR time, not ours, but it's... hard. I dunno.)

(clapping) this should be a show!

keep up the good work and nice long chapters.

this is good sorry I didnt review the other two chapters.