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loveseverussnape 2007-09-03 ch 6,	abusethis is a fantastic story. please continue with it. i can't wait for some more interaction between hermione and snape, and i want to see the trial, and snapes reaction when he seesharry now that he knows how he treated hermione. i hope snape sticks up for hermione. keep up the great work. please update sometime soon.
TamarackPines 2007-02-26 ch 1,	abuseI HOPE you update soon...this is a WONDERFUL story! ^_^ Sin, TamarackPines
Celebwen Telcontar 2006-05-01 ch 6,	abuseWow... very well done! And where in Avalon did Harry learn Ligemens?! And why did he rip into her mind like that? That's like mentally raping his best friend! I find that some time in Azkaban for that would be appropriate. I love the HGSS interaction there. Celebwen Telcontar
Paprika 2006-04-22 ch 6,	abuseInteresting begining, i look forward to the next chapters.
Severus-Fan 2006-04-20 ch 6,	abuseI feel so bad for the both of them...but I'm glad you've updated. I can't remember much of this story (I'm going to go back and re-read it) so I can't make too many comments, sorry. But I do hope you update again very soon!
my little chickadee 2006-04-20 ch 6,	abuseExcellent story! Can't wait for more!
evil-mastermind666 2006-04-20 ch 3,	abusewow, Harry's being a HUGE jerk
snapedreamer 2006-04-20 ch 6,	abuseomg i lovced how you got harry down so well. Just perfect and how i would guess e acted.
Megan Consoer 2006-04-20 ch 6,	abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Megan Consoer 2006-04-12 ch 5,	abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Sonata IX 2006-03-20 ch 5,	abuseYou probably don't know me, but I've been reading your Labyrinth stories for years and years...I find it amusing that you also ended up writing HGSS, so rare and yet one of the only HP pairing I find enticing. And so far doing an admirable job with it! So hard to build a realistic relationship there...perhaps what makes it appealing though. Also saw your note about life keeping you from writing...well, I gave up a year or so back on checking your geocities site for updates, but I'm glad you're on matter how long it takes, I'm bound to stumble across you again and whenever you DO find time to write, I'll be there. ;) I too have had life interfere with my writing, most recently for a year and half between chapters, but for some people it's enough just to know that you're still out there and still holding these stories in the back of your mind...that someday far away they may finally get written. Best of luck to you!
Anon. 2005-11-27 ch 5, anon.	abuseI don't believe it! I've been checking your LOTR story daily for updates for months... finally I decided to look around here, and find you've started a fantastic HP story, so I settle down and read... but only five chapters! And now I'm salivating for more on two stories, not just one. I love your writing, absolutely love it.
prin69 2005-11-12 ch 5,	abuseamazing
LadyErinSnape 2005-11-03 ch 5,	abuseI like the way that you are showing Severus's recovery. It's written in a very realistic fashion and it makes the story even more appealing than it would have been had you skipped the fact that injured or not a person's bodily functions still work. I like that you've shown Hermione's relationship with Ron through a letter. I wasn't sure about their relationship before the war, but knowing that he had admitted his love to her and went to help her with her plan (whatever that was) makes it believable that she believes he died because of her (Harry's words about why she was saved in the previous chapter would feed that guilt making it worse for her). It was 'good' having her breakdown, she would need that kind of release with all of the built up pain that she has been dealing with silently. I like that he also saw how much she has been working in his defense through her notes on how many times he has protected them in the past. Don't worry about slow updates, real life becomes a pain in the rear but sadly it comes first.
mcfly85 2005-10-31 ch 5,	abuseReally beautiful. The interaction between them just feels perfectly in character. And OMG - the bit about Ron! The way this is developing, especially with those few lines, is making a really great case for the rightness of their relationship. Love it!

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