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| Dark Syrinx 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAngsty goodness. I love it. |
| Luv2write4u13 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abuseAw that was so good and so sad. The imagery was amazing and it almost had me in tears. |
| ellieincarnate 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abusewow...wow...and wow again...that was effin awsome...i am 100% Sellie but this was amazing! |
| xcrazibabii69x 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseaww, poor ellie. she misses sean. i wanna see her be happy, but for some reason, she just...isn't. |
| drown-in-fate 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abusewow, I just, that was amazing. beautiful:) |
| Lissy-panda 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseHoly moly that was good. Very good use of imagery. You're a great author. |
| Maibe Josie 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I don't think there's another way to describe it. Well written POV of Ellie after Sean left. My favorite line was "But as my eyes crack (and they always do,)I wish you would only tell me one more lie, because I know I can't keep doing this." It all flowed magnificently together. The line, "I don't want you to feel guilty. I'm not doing this for you. It's just; you never should have lied to me." it's such a great rationalization in her head. You make me hate Sean more for leaving her like that...and saying "I love you" before she left him in Wasaga... |