 wilderness-writer 2006-02-15 . chapter 1lol, wow. I did not see a talking walrus coming, but nice touch with introducing a new sort of legend into the story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter... |
 maryie 2005-09-01 . chapter 1 OMG I GOD LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! |
 Awapuhi 2005-08-13 . chapter 1keep up the good work! |
 Dracori 2005-08-04 . chapter 1Now THAT was an interesting chapter! |
 Booter-Freak 2005-07-26 . chapter 1Why haven't I reviewed this yet? Anyway, cool chapter. We haven't seen too much of the Spirit World since WSpt.1, and you expanded on it nicely. Great job! XD |
 MysticAnime 2005-07-12 . chapter 1Wow... I enjoyed mucho much! so..tired but determined to leave a review this time...
I did read all the chapters in order and they're fun like the show and feel true to the shows nature. It feels a bit rushed in some parts, like you're just glossing over idea's without fully explaining what's truely happening. But what is written down is very creative and original or well inspired by ^_~
I remember Hollywood saying that there are no new original ideas or stories... with the more i learn and watch stuff I come to realize they might be right. But you've defentaly mastered finding influances from a wide array of sources and making them your own at the same time. LOVE IT!
Yep, I'm once again proven that it does pay to check out peoples pages who review for some of my fav fanficts! (In this case Booter-Freak's 'Close Combat') ^-^ Find new fun good fictlits to read and keep me awake at night ;p |
 Monito 2005-07-12 . chapter 1CUTE I LOVE THIS CHAPTER |
 XSeabiscuitX 2005-07-12 . chapter 1Chp.17 was better, but good. If you've got time, could you read & review my story? I think it's bad & I'm going to do some rewriting, but what do you think? |
 Zukos Girl 2005-07-12 . chapter 1nice story, the bit about Zuko and Sedna and the freeing thing was a bit confusing, but it was good, new story soon! |
 Hawkeye116 2005-07-12 . chapter 1This one was very, very original. Good job! You should be proud of it. |