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NailPolishRemover
2008-09-09 . chapter 1
This is so good! Love it! *fav* :D
BlackRoseOfTheGrave
2008-05-16 . chapter 1
Me likey!
BankotsuChick
2007-07-30 . chapter 1
All I have to say is WOW.
This was one of the most beautiful fanfictions I'd ever come across. It was so smooth and laced with detail and the perfect amount of dialoug. You captured the real personalities of Masashi Kisimoto's Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi and Kisame in a sweet, romatic, perfect story that deserves much more than the reveiws it has.
Truely, I was starting to believe that was a site filled with nothing but tripe, but once in a blue moon I'll find a very talented writter who puts the utmost effort and care into these works. I loved this story.

you're an amazing writter and could easily be a successful author.
Fantastic fanfic.
-Bankotsuchick
Kyra
2007-07-19 . chapter 1
The ending was really sweet. Wonderful job ^_^

Thanks for posting!
DarkMiko13
2007-06-15 . chapter 1
i really love this story!! i liked how you made itachi so vulnerable and yet still strong. i have never seen it in any opther fanfic and i really liked it!! one of my favorite parts was when itachi saw sasuke and naruto playing in the water and didnt have to the heart to break it. it showed that itachi still cares for sasuke a lot!! a lot of fans always think that itachi is evil but i always thought that there was another side of him. one that really did love sasuke and only wanted to protect him. your fanfic showed all of that and more!! I LOVED KINKY SASUKE AND DOMINATING KISAME IT WAS SOO HOT!! ;)
Kakashis-First-Kiss
2007-05-03 . chapter 1
OOC, but really cute and fluffy. I liked it, especially Itachi on the bottom. ^_^
Silver Twilight Kitsune
2007-03-11 . chapter 1
Great story! *drools* I think I may like it a little too much. Hyahaha...I luv the Naruto and the Sasuke! X3
Skins Thunderbomb
2007-01-12 . chapter 1
That was very cute! :D I have read it before but I must've forgotten to comment, something I will make amends with! XD I like your Itachi, and Kisame acts so ... well, ... sharky on his instincts, if that's a good way to put it. Nicely done!

Are you going to write more Kisame and Itachi stories? I would love that :)

ST
DemonRogue
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
That was great! I think you did a really good job and I loved the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke also.
Daitai Otonashii Ookami
2006-07-29 . chapter 1
Loved that the Uchihas were the ukes. x3 Gyah, I think I love you. Marry me? x3 this was absolute love.

::cj::
VeiledLantern
2006-07-29 . chapter 1
*falls on the floor*

sexy, sexy Sasuke!

Ow man, this is the sexiest characterization of Sasuke I've ever read and I so love it. You also got it right with Naruto and Itachi is yummy. I wish I'm seeing him like this on most fics but well (shrugs) I think this is one of the few kisaita fics I like.
jinxgirl5
2006-05-05 . chapter 1
OMG! MY BRAIN HAS BEEN THROWN INTO INSANITY FROM THIS FIC! Oh wait, it's always been like that. Never mind. lol This was a good fic. It was somewhat shocking to see an Itachi fic, cause ya just don't see those. Once I got over the brain-destroying shock, I couldn't stop giggling. DAMN THE GIGGLING! ...Sorry for the rambling. Bag habit *evil grin*
professor ren
2006-02-15 . chapter 1
Omg, I loved it, very, very well written. I thought the ending paragraph really did it for this fic, it fit it well.

Keep it up, okay?
alex.barista
2005-10-06 . chapter 1
HOLY **
THIS WAS SO SWEET
RLLY FUNNY TOO
ITACHI IS IRRESISTABLE
LOL
GREAT WRITE
UPDATE SOON
Udyjay
2005-08-08 . chapter 1
Aw, aw! That was...so cute. I loved the random NaruSasu parts, those were funny. xD Hm. Wet, horny sexy Sasuke? YES. God **, YES. Yay for Naru. And Kisame.
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