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Vanilla Slash
2008-09-10 . chapter 3
*Applauds* Perfect! Love this fic! You know, some authors tend to unconsciously favor one character over another in ShizNat, but you balanced the two girls perfectly. I was completely moved o.0
The.Hoppy
2007-02-06 . chapter 3
I'd read it before, but never reviewed. So. This was a nice fic. Not too long, but long enough to have a definite conclusion. At any rate, I liked it. ^^
~Naolin
Alex
2006-08-25 . chapter 3
I think it fits perfectly the show. It is awesome!
However, I found a mistake, yeah. In the part two, you wrote "had been" twice... XD
Well, sorry it's to difficult to find error in your fanfic >_
kikyo4ever
2006-07-31 . chapter 2
What happened to you? I hope you are doing well and bring more chapter to this story. I'm dying of waiting. I could only hope you consider on writing more and please update soon...I hate patience but I have no choice. I look forward.
pretend_2besome1
2006-07-30 . chapter 3
I like your fic it's good...hope you will make another **/Nat fic
kikyo4ever
2006-05-13 . chapter 3
I LOVE YOUR STORY. PLEASE DON'T STOP AND UPDATE MORE. This is one good and interesting story.
Astarael00
2005-10-27 . chapter 3
“Shizuru! What is more important: your graduation or tea?”

“Tea.” She stated simply, clutching her warm blankets closer to her. Wasn’t that obvious?

*cracks up* Ahahahaha...that was great...*wipes eyes*

*ahem* Anyway, I really liked your fanfic. The banter between Natsuki and Shizuru was especially well done. Hope you continue writing N/S fics.
onenonly
2005-10-08 . chapter 3
I LOVE YOU!! PLEASE DONT STOP!!
Meo
2005-10-04 . chapter 1
Since there is a Mai HiME section now under anime, you should probably move this great little fic over to there.
Kieli
2005-09-22 . chapter 3
Seravy was kind enough to send me the link for this and I've not been disappointed. Only thing that caught my eye was that Youko is Midori's best friend and not her sister. But this is an excellent story. You might want to come over to our Mai HiME C2 group and add your fic to the list:
Seravy
2005-09-21 . chapter 3
Augh. I kept telling myself that I was going to review and I thought I did until I checked and had to slap myself twice. Anyways, absolutely amazing fic. Great writing, exceptional pace and a very plausible aftermath. I just love how you address Shizuru and Natsuki's emotions, keeping them in character and without taking the situation too lightly considering what had happened. Great job! hope you write more! I just can't get enough of Shizuru/Natsuki... or Shizuru to be more specific. (me big kaicho-sama fan :p)
Dauthi
2005-08-30 . chapter 3
It's beautiful. And all those other words that I can't find right now. >_>
ShizNat fangirl
2005-08-26 . chapter 3
CUTE! I'm glad ur hand is ok. :) We wouldn't want anything to happen to you so that you couldn't write anymore. Hurry up and UPDATE!
ShizNat fangirl
2005-08-26 . chapter 2
Once again this story is so cool. I absolutely LOVE this fic.
umami
2005-08-23 . chapter 1
The ending of Mai-HIME really bothered me in that everything went from morbidly depressing to uber-happy in the space of 5 minutes...and I think you did a really good job of explaining all those plot omissions ^_^ Natsuki and Shizuru were fleshed out nicely, and they interact in a very believable (and kawaii) way. Keep writing!
P.S. hope your arm is better ^_^
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