Love it! :)

considering this was your first story that was pretty good! however, you should write for yourself and your own enjoyment, not just for others. the more you write (and the more fanfiction you read) the better you will get, and there will always be someone interested in you work.

a beta is someone who acts as a sounding board for a writer and nitpicks/helps you edit your stories. i'm pretty sure there's a beta section on ffnet that can help you find one,

or you could just ask around.

That was your first story? Great, great job if that's so. Amazing; I wish I could have written like that on my first go... - well, you know what I mean. Definitely a favorite. Good Job.

i liked it alot but one thing i noticed was some of the sentences didnt have spaces in between the words so it was kind of hard to understand

aw! love it!

Wonderful! Great ending :)

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I really loved this story...it was really cute.

aww... that was so sweet!_ i loved it, great job!:D

I think this is very well written, and you should definately write more fics!

Excellent hehehe, Albus is always the watchful one isn't he?

Ron is an arrogant sod! Damn that dastardly idiot!

Got to love Dumbledore.

OH I also like Dumbledore Hermione pairings!

This was a random review wasn't it? Oh well, good work.

Lovely. Congratulations on a terrific first effort.

aww, loved it, so cute, found ur longer stories, gonna read them in min, the um, 'how one decision can change ur life' and 'past meetings', I love the hermione/Snape ship, so long as she is old enuf oviously, but legal age here is 16, in JK's wizard world tis 17, so all seems k, haha, most fics she appears ot b 18 neways, but yah i love HGSS plz do write more :D, to read others now haha, thanx, luv CalleighRox, x

How sweet

-freaks out- AMAZING! AWESOME! I like the end with Dumbledore, it just creates the perfect finish. hihi I love it! Way to go!