 jmstevens 2008-08-26 . chapter 1'It's Monday.' Lol. Love it.
Great job on this. |
 GSRGeeklover 2006-05-11 . chapter 1Oeh.. I like the ending!! :O :P |
 lantiscod 2005-10-17 . chapter 1Death...Deaf...She should know how to face...Like the pics you post on "under bridge"... I haven't login yet... |
 cherry-kiss-red 2005-08-20 . chapter 1GREAT! I love it!! |
 SwizzleKiss878 2005-07-20 . chapter 1Aww, I love it! Just the right amount of angst and humor. :) |
 Wiccagirl24 2005-07-20 . chapter 1Ha! The end was great. Loved the punchline. |
 msgrits 2005-07-15 . chapter 1fun and interesting...nice |
 pinkforensics 2005-07-13 . chapter 1That was great. I love how you fit the "It's Monday" in for the last line.
-- Rebecca |
 The Phantom26 2005-07-13 . chapter 1oh this was so cute...loved it at the end where it turned out to be just a watery faucet LoL. |
 Frederica 2005-07-13 . chapter 1Who said you couldn't compete on this challenge, cause you can! Thanks a lot for reviewing, I'll try to review yours now. (Don't expect much of it, I reviewed twice, and these stories were from my beta-reader...)
It's so funny! A really surprising ending as well! Very talented... Good for you that you also have the talent to write short stories. I can't. Usually I write stories of 50 words per chapter, so this was a challenge for me, haha!
In short, Lynn, I was the one not being able to compete, haha! Well done!! |
 Megara1 2005-07-13 . chapter 1Hi !!
Really good !!
Loved especially the falsh-back ;) and the end !! Make me laugh !!
Great story, great answer !!
Megara1 |