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| Reviews for my home town |
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   MegaBellatrixFreak 7/28/08 . chapter 1Great beginning! Even though it was short (which I really don't care about at all), it was direct, smart, and to the point. -MBF |
| BoredandEvil 7/24/05 . chapter 3 well, i guess that if i can have fantasies, so can you... is this what goes through your mind? god you DO have a tiny iq... O.o . :D |
| BoredandEvil 7/24/05 . chapter 2 uh... am i sposed to be the smart one here? and i cant beleive you would kill me off. wait. yes i can. |
| Iniysa 7/14/05 . chapter 3 Aw, that was sad, but I'm glad they fixed the problem! Good story! Lauren |
| Iniysa 7/14/05 . chapter 2 An over all good chapter! Needs a bit of beta work, over all good! Lauren |
| Iniysa 7/14/05 . chapter 1 Good start, a little short but it sounds intresting! Lauren |
