That was a cool fic, I enjoyed reading it!!
I always wonder why Fai does not use his magic so I hope that I will find out soon!!
Have a good day!!

I think is fine for a short fic.But like in ur Author note say,I wonder why he even used his magic in first palce?An Omen?Or something else?

Very well-written. :) I really like the little slice of life you've captured, and the characters are very much in character. I'm sure Sakura will keep the little secret, but it would be nice if Fay reveals his past eventually.

lovely. i know that this was a one shot, but please can't you just ignore it and continue this story? please?! *_*

Yes, I return again. I like this, even though I find no real use in it... Oh well, the useless fics are the best.

Nice story! I liked the Fai / Sakura interaction (Sakura is insightful in her own manner although Fai's definitely hard for anyone to pin down.) Fai's fear of his magic or being seen is interesting, and I hope CLAMP explains it soon.

y'know, i really like how you focused on sakura and fai-- i mean, i think fai takes care of sakura a lot... ~thinks~ i dunno how to put into words but... aiyiyi. anyways, me likes ~big smile~

haha... kuro-tan hit fai... muwa... ^_^

lovely lovely job! I really did enjoy it!

Cute story. I liked it alot.

you put them in good character ^_~ Do some more of these one shot fanfics will ya? please... ok, laters!

Hey, that's as good a reason as any I've heard to write a fic. One of my fics was written simply because I was craving banana pudding. ^^'`
This was cute, though. I've only read the first manga, but from what I know of the characters you wrote them very well. Great fic.

WAI! You should 'play' with the characters more often, you do them so well! I've only read the first Tsubasa manga, so I can't accurately say that you have them down, but from what I've seen you, well, do! This is going on my favorites!

Damn. That was just so damn cute and well written.

There were a few things that I enjoyed about this fic; one, is that it shows that you put some time and thought into this by making it longer than the normal in this section. (One shot writers here are sometimes wimps. 200-300 words for one story?? Puh-lease!) The descpritions and characters were right on and an enjoyment to read.

The second thing that I really liked about this fic is the charaters you choose to play with. Sakura and Fai fics hardly exsist, so it nice to see something different from the normal, occasionally unoriginal romance.

A small bit of critic; While I liked Fai in this story, I thought Sakura did not say much and fell asleep too soon. Don't take this to heart, this is just an silly thing I would have liked. Good story otherwise

Hmm. Sakura's onto things now, huh? Nice twist. Mostly you see Kurogane catching onto what Fai's doing. But then again, maybe he already has and Sakura's just catching up. Ah well. Ignore me and my mindless rambling.

Now I know that the others know that Fai has the capability to do magic. And I think I know why he doesn't want to use it. But why would he be scared of being caught doing what looks to be the simplest spell in the book? It was just a leaf. Guilty conscience maybe? Being caught doing something he really shouldn't be doing.

Are you gonna continue this? Huh? Are ya? Are ya? *begging pose* Please? The ending you gave just BEGS for another chapter! May your muses be with you!

Eagerly awaiting,
Hayai