helloo! This fic was really nice! :) I like it!

Very nice. Well-written and very in-character, which I know can be challenging with Fai. It's subtleness gives it a beauty all its own. In conclusion: love it! :3

- Kiana

That was a cool fic, I enjoyed reading it!

I always wonder why Fai does not use his magic so I hope that I will find out soon!

Have a good day!

I think is fine for a short like in ur Author note say,I wonder why he even used his magic in first palce?An Omen?Or something else?

Very well-written. :) I really like the little slice of life you've captured, and the characters are very much in character. I'm sure Sakura will keep the little secret, but it would be nice if Fay reveals his past eventually.

lovely. i know that this was a one shot, but please can't you just ignore it and continue this story? please? *_*

Yes, I return again. I like this, even though I find no real use in it... Oh well, the useless fics are the best.

Nice story! I liked the Fai / Sakura interaction (Sakura is insightful in her own manner although Fai's definitely hard for anyone to pin down.) Fai's fear of his magic or being seen is interesting, and I hope CLAMP explains it soon.

y'know, i really like how you focused on sakura and fai- i mean, i think fai takes care of sakura a lot... thinks i dunno how to put into words but... aiyiyi. anyways, me likes big smile

haha... kuro-tan hit fai... muwa... _

lovely lovely job! I really did enjoy it!

Cute story. I liked it alot.

you put them in good character _ Do some more of these one shot fanfics will ya? please... ok, laters!

Hey, that's as good a reason as any I've heard to write a fic. One of my fics was written simply because I was craving banana pudding. '

This was cute, though. I've only read the first manga, but from what I know of the characters you wrote them very well. Great fic.

WAI! You should 'play' with the characters more often, you do them so well! I've only read the first Tsubasa manga, so I can't accurately say that you have them down, but from what I've seen you, well, do! This is going on my favorites!

Damn. That was just so damn cute and well written.