Ooh...I love the dark, creepy atmosphere.

I like the way you began it...but I'm confused on who "she" is. The girl who said, "yes." Seems like she played a key role in Ryou's rape. It makes it actually seems like Ryou is heterosexual in the beginning and that he adn Bakura are not actually going to be together... (is he bi, then?)

I love the way you describe Ryou's rape. It was totally in his point of veiw and showed how abstract his thoughts are. You used physical adjectives to describe his thoughts...very cool. XD

I noticed that Bakura refered to Ryou as, "the boy" or "host" in his first snippet but then changed to "hikari" when he realized that Ryou was actually dying, as if he was pained when his geussing was confirmed by reality. Dunno if you meant anything though...

"...the noise seemed to take on a physical form and dance in front of his eyes. Ah... the colors were so strange. He looked over, and found that he was lying in a puddle of deep, dark purple blood."

THAT'S AWESOME. I LOVE THAT...lol, it just takes us readers into Ryou's point of veiw so much easier...

I like how you used Anubis to represent death. Though the YUgioh movie kinda ruined it...I picture this cross between Mai, a very buff guy, adn a cow grinning in the shadows...XD XD XD

OMG, I'd review more but I have to go! Mom's home. Ja ne!

i havent read that many suicide fics (actually, other than mine, i am pretty sue this is the only one of yugioh i have read.) so i guess that it would be new to me. but anyay, i am happy that you brillant writing was my first view on tendershipping suicide fic. it was awesome.

very nice. I like it alot

I believe I am in love with this story, i was on the break of tears, amazingly written and nice use of words

aww! that was nice! sorry that was kinda lame

Wow. This is quite possibly one of the best RyouxBakura abuse/suicide fics I have ever read. I loved all the detail, it totally draws people in. And ya it was a bit trippy, but who doesn't like trippy once in a while, ne? :)

Jadira

AH I love it XD