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| Inspirationbynight 2006-02-24 ch 3, anon. | abusew00t! A TMNT fic! Yeah! I'm kinda lost on what all was going on in the middle of chp 1 and 2. You're POV is interesting but if you can make it clear who's talking and what's going on, it would be an even better fic. Keep up the good work though, I'll be waiting for the next chp! |