LOVE IT! MUST HEAR MORE! A little advice though, try not to go on about the buisness too much because it gets boring and confusing. Just simplify things instead of using so many numbers and other termonalogy. Also be careful not to say the same words over to many times. I got teary eyed reading the third chapter. I love it! PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!

who are they!?!? you have to post more soon!! is kagome gonna have a break down now? please hurry with the next chapter. i started reading this SO SO long ago and your finally rewriting it! post more soon! great job! why did kagome leave in the past? does seiko know about her feudal era stuff? what happened with naraku?

who is it! oh!! i wanna know so bad!

well, that was mean...post more soon! evil cliff hangers ARGHness so hurry with the next one! who was it?

Hye, you write longer than I can.

*stares intently at computer*
...I keep hoping that if I do this long enough, words will just magically appear and tell me what happens.
It's not really working.

*falls asleep* me know how Seiko feel...*yawn*
Right.
So anyway, I guess I'll just have to be patient and wait for the next wonderful installment of this wonderful work of fiction.

I got to the end of the chapter and thought, "Where's the rest?"
I completely forgot that this site updates chapter by chapter. I was totally dumbfounded for a moment.
Then I remembered and slapped myself on the head while yelling "YOU IDIOT!"

I'm just a little off today.

On another note...Where's the rest?
Good job. I look forward to reading more!

that was so good

so your finally getting around tyo working on this again ^^ I'm glad, i wanna read more please post more soon!