This was brilliant - I've always thought that Evanescence and Constantine go well together. Actually I made a Constantine Video to Tourniquet - please watch!

this is such an awesome story; there is a sad, sad lacking of decent, well-written non mary sue fics out there...your is brilliant :) Please update soon, and maybe, (you seriously don't need to take my suggestion...) we could see Balthazar...he's such an awesome character...his interaction with young John would be very interesting indeed; they say that Balthazar was the first demon that John actually got to know, I think I heard that in a Gavin Rossdale interview...ANYway, this is a really awsome story, John in SO in character hehe!

vary cool.

this is a nice collection of songs about John Constantine ;-) keep up the good work and update soon

HAHA Dr. Douch-bag.
This was a great chaper. I was wondering where you went :)

Great chapter! John going to Hell really hooked my attention! I loved the way you’re recounting his childhood in this story. What a great idea. Also I admired the way you described Constantine’s feelings as he slit his wrists, and the way he swore at Minos. John really has my sympathy.

Nice first chapter! I’ve got this weird image of young John Constantine; he looks exactly the same only two feet tall. I loved the fact that his play school teacher was called “Mr. Gabriel”. Of course being Gabriel from the movie. Nice one!

hey it's me again that was really good update soon!!

Awesome! Poor John. Its great cant wait for the next chapter!

This is a very good story. Could you update soon? I read your profile, and I just want to say we have a lot in common. I feel different most of the time and at school and at home I escape into books. Constine and Donnie darko are some of my faveorite films, I am also a star wars nut and am trying to read all of the novels. I got to go now, but thanks for reading this reveiw. R. Warr (ps that is my real name)

Your good.Evanescence rocks! hope you update soon.

I LOVE IT

Amazing start! It'll be really cool to see what Constantine's life was like when he was younger. You are a pretty good writter so stop being so pessimistic!:) I hope you continue this story and update soon!

hey it's me where did this go b4? i was lost lol. anyway this was so much better than b4 the first was good but this was amazing m8 well done update soon!