Incredibly sad! Good writing, though.

this is really good...a rare take on severus's POV. we definitly need more fics like these.

Wow! all I can say is wow! It is good and probably true, but It is dark too.
Laurahonest

"The first time I saw you, Lily, you were the collection of everything I had been denied: beauty, kindness, warmth…Love… You contained only light for you soul was made of it. Your green eyes shone with it. It is the shadow’s curse to love and follow the light. You were everything I had been taught to hate. How I hated you… Because you made me weak… Because I wanted you… Because I loved you. You were the evidence of a certain weakness and goodness in what still existed of my soul. You were the proof that all I had ever been told were lies."

Wonferful.I loved it so much.. This somehow explains why he hates Harry so much. Because Harry's emerald eyes reminds him so much of Lily.Because Harry's emerald eyes reminds him so much of Lily's warmth and love.Aww,i love it.I don't undrstand why everyone hates Snape so much, he's obviously had a horrible past..
with love, Midnight Hallow

Aww...that's sad, but it's also really good. You wrote this very well. Great job.

Darn near perfect. This has so much in it, you could have gone off on any number of tangents, but you stayed focussed and gave us this heartbreaking piece.

Thank you.

" I hate the earth because it is allowed to hold you." I need a tissue.

Oh, poor Snape...that's so sad.

THAT WAS SO SAD! I love it! It really captures all of Snapes feelings for Lilly. I wish someone would write a fic in which Snape and Lilly actually ended up together. Snape has had such a horrible life, I don't understand how anyone could hate him...
Keep on writing~

Hmm, usually I'm not into Snape/Lily, but this is very good. Great job, keep it up.

that's beautiful, and so sad. great job!