you're a bitchy mcbitchface... a douchy macdouchebag... three years ago you reviewed a story i'd written in 7th grade. well. i've changed a lot since then. but you're still a **. and i hate you for that.

hint: It's Raining Men. Hallelujah. It's Raining Men. Amen.

~*~ Madeline ~*~

I can see you thought about how to weave Jareth's actions into the story - explaining the song and crystals. Creative and interesting read.

Passionate and realistic. Again you bring a very interesting POV to the fore. Nice character development here too.

Very interesting POV and insight into what Jareth was thinking. Well written. Nicely done.