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Horselvr4evr123
2009-01-24 . chapter 9
Gah! For the some reason the site wouldn't let me leave a review for the previous two chapters. When it decides to work I'll get right on that.

Oh no-z! They got Russel! And Envy-as-Russel slipped into Ed's room. Not good. Keep up the great work! ^^
Horselvr4evr123
2009-01-24 . chapter 6
Aww! They kissed! But Roy has feelings for Ed. If Ed and Russel carry on further than a simple-ish kiss...hm...CONFLICT! XD Keep up the great work!
Horselvr4evr123
2009-01-24 . chapter 5
Another awesome chappie! Keep up the great work! ^^
Horselvr4evr123
2009-01-24 . chapter 4
I must say it's quite interesting to see the two older brorhers getting along like they do. Of course I always think more along the lines of the anime so this could be normal for all I know. Or not. Maybe. Anyway, (sorry for the Ed-sized rant XD ) another awesome chappie! Keep up the great work! ^^
Horselvr4evr123
2009-01-24 . chapter 3
I luvthe different encounter with Russel. Instead of in the research lab it's down in town. XD Keep up the great work!
Horselvr4evr123
2009-01-24 . chapter 2
Uh-oh! The Homunculi are in on it. Eep! can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work! *races off to read next chapter*
Horselvr4evr123
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
Holycrapthisisawesome! XD Keep up the great work!^^
ApocSM
2006-11-05 . chapter 10
WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!
roseless
2006-04-09 . chapter 10
woww, this is very intresting.
so suspenseful lol
update soon
hieiluverone
2006-02-13 . chapter 10
I love your writing style ^_^ I can't wait for your next chapter
Requiem of Silence
2006-01-29 . chapter 10
Yay! ^_^ This chapter really has things rolling. I hope in a good direction, especially now that Envy's ruse has gotten some holes poked through. It doesn't really matter too much, though, since Roy won't trace the line until it's too late. Assuming it's too late.

It's going along swimmingly so far. You must update soon!

((Yeah, I'm speed-reviewing. I'm sorry! T_T))
Requiem of Silence
2005-09-20 . chapter 9
O_O

You've officially scared me.

That's good.

M, this is my new favourite chapter! (All yours are my favourties, but this is my favourite of the favourites.) Havoc and his family dying. Won't they . . . I don't know . . . get wind of the Lieutenant's parents' deaths and wonder what Havoc's doing? "Oh, he's probably busy with the funeral. Let's not grieve him any more." >>;; Yeah, that's how it might sound.

Ah, I really like the conspiring between the homunculi. (Conspiring. Ooh, what a delicious word.) Envy really does love to play pretend, doesn't he? Fletcher acting all Envy-like . . . *shivers* He's too cute for that. Maybe when he gains a few inches it'd be strangely menacing, but not with his short stature. And what happened to the original Fletch? Is he alive? Is he hurt? T_T

Great, now I'm all hyped up and ready to write. (Hey-ho, let's go.) I guess that's a good thing, but I should save this rambling.

So there's my review that's so painfully random that it brings all other reviews shame. ^_^;;

As always, a fascinating yarn is spun. Let's hope it keeps spinning.
Alchemist X
2005-09-20 . chapter 9
GAH! You've got me hooked! A nice story with quite a lot of my fav. pairings, and you update! Keep it up!
KakumeiKid
2005-08-20 . chapter 8
OMG! i love your story! the plot is so awesome! i also like the way that you develoiped the relationship between Ed and Russel. update soon!
Requiem of Silence
2005-08-17 . chapter 8
Yes! Chapter 8 and soon the chapter I've heard so much about, I can't wait! ^__^ (Wow, chapter eight, I can't believe it. O.O This is the first fic I've ever followed so doggedly.)

*cough* Back to the story, it does have a similar feel to the anime, especially with the Roy-and-Hughes-talking-seriously-in-a-pub sequence. I love your Hughes and Roy interactions! They're absolutely fantastic. If you could make it better, I'd die of bliss.

Also, Russell and Ed are being the sneaky older brothers they are, which makes me nervous. At least the younger siblings are having a good time. Like I said before, it's a kind of up-down feeling that is projected through Edward. And you throw in the homunculi just to add a third opinion! Sloth suddenly appearing helps the plot move along.

What does Ed mean, 'they did it?' 0_o He's an Elite now?! This makes me so confused, but don't try explaining, I know I'll figure it out in later chapters! Heh.

Last lines always better. I forgot to say it, but it's true, dammit! I feel so outranked. XP This just makes me want to write Same Direction even better to meet this kind of magnificent story-telling. It also makes me feel better when I run around in the narrative. XD

Reading this in the morning is the highlight of my day. Continue, kay?
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