 Hisa Kumini 2007-12-24 . chapter 5You know, this is/was quite interesting for a story about someone named Barney. It was a little short, but entertaining none-the-less. |
 NightRaven13 2007-03-04 . chapter 5Oh WOW!!
What an awesome story!! I loved every bit of it! It was like The Bourne Idenity meets DNAngel...it was simply great writting! My only grips about this story is that it seemed a bit on the short side with a discontinuing ending...but I guess thats what made it so great! Brilliantly composed and organized...please consider writting an epilogue of some sort or,if time permits, hopefully a secound part of some sorts? Lovely writting...looking foward to more in the future.
A very happy reader,
-NightRaven13 |
 cheeky doggie 2006-01-20 . chapter 5This story is fantastic!! Dark losing his memory, being called Barney...*giggles* sounds funny on him. How does Daisuke and Satoshi fit in this though, I wonder? Can you make an epilouge or something like that? It's really good! |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-01-10 . chapter 5What?!
what happened to krissy and Becky?
you got to write an epilouge or something |
 Timetill 2005-07-21 . chapter 5a lovely story! you wrote well, and the ending was great! |
 Shania Nowhere 2005-07-21 . chapter 2Thank you again for the great reviews. It was meant to be short, I don't have time anymore to write really long stories so...thus it was short. I guess you'll just have to use your imagination with the ending. ~_^ Or maybe I'll carry the characters over to a new story, who knows. It'll depend on the time I have to write something. O:D Until then! |
 kitsuneofthedarknessflame 2005-07-20 . chapter 5such a nice story. Very good! |
 Lazy Eldarbreath 2005-07-20 . chapter 5O.O OOH! Interesting! Aww, I would have liked to see more... T_T Why did it have to end? I like the name Becky gave him... Barney... Actually I hate the dinosaur, but it was funny when she called him that. XDD This was a beautifully written story! Keep writing!
And I looked at your galleries and you are a wonderful artist! ^^ You rock! XD |
 hittocerebattosai 2005-07-20 . chapter 5That was wonderful! I LOVED it! I didn't realize you had so much finished till today though! Thank you for writing it! I can think of nothing you could do to get it better... Its GREAT! *really happy girl here after reading it* |
 Shania Nowhere 2005-07-17 . chapter 1Thanks for the positive reviews! Yes, there will be more soon as I write more, heh. There should be another chapter soon, maybe in a couple of days. ^_^ |
 kitsuneofthedarknessflame 2005-07-17 . chapter 2this story was great! One of the greatest I've read. I do hope that you'll update soon, please? |
 Timetill 2005-07-17 . chapter 2it looks like Dark's starting to get a bit of his old personality back. please continue! |
 Timetill 2005-07-14 . chapter 1very interesting, i wonder how it'll turn out? i liked it! |