Reviews for Let's Stay Together Always

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MysticSorceror 2008-08-18 ch 12,	abuseThings I liked: Good descriptions Yep she did go pretty fast, good characterisation Cute Tohru-Yuki interactions Poor Ha'ri Ways to improve: Spelling error: "wacked" I really am wondering what will happen next ~Myst Things that I didn't like: Author notes
MysticSorceror 2008-08-17 ch 11,	abuseThings I liked: Lol, Shigure said..not quite the right thing It's good that they caught Shigure-san going up there Fabulous descriptions The clothes fit the characters ~Myst Things that I didn't like: I think Marie might have been better as a one time character but then I personally dislike tag-a-long characters Arinesia?
MysticSorceror 2008-08-17 ch 10,	abuseThings I liked: Having the chapters shorter makes reading easier Cute Yukiru fluff Ways to improve: Work on spacing Try to improve the characterisation especially Uo-chan ~Myst Things that I didn't like: Seemed to mimick the anime a little too much Pace is really really fast Overuse of the word said "to the effect she had one everyone?" Hana's not a physic ^^;;
MysticSorceror 2008-08-16 ch 9,	abuseThings I liked: Nice writing style and I like the emotion and details I'm glad that Momiji has someone to lean on Aww I love the Yukiru fluff Yay Haa-kun! ~Myst Things that I didn't like: Some of the phrasing is slightly weird Disjointed sentences You're missing the honorifics on Tohru's speech
MysticSorceror 2008-08-10 ch 8,	abuseThings I liked: Great characterisation Yay the Ferris Wheel will be fun Aww poor Tohru but I do like that line "At least she'd be with him." I'm interested in Marie right now The part with Akito really seemed to fit her/his character The couples interactions are pretty sweet Great last line Ways to improve: Spacing Work on characterisation ~Myst Things that I didn't like: Strongly dislike Haru and Hana as a couple Writing feels a bit stiff
MysticSorceror 2008-08-09 ch 7,	abuseThings I liked: Fantastic characterisations Yay he got lost Aww poor Yuki but you could expect for that to happen to him It's adorable how in love Tohru and Yuki seem to be Ways to improve: Spacing ~Myst Things that I didn't like: Author Notes Pace is a bit rushed
MysticSorceror 2008-08-09 ch 6,	abuseThings I liked: Brilliant characterisation Adorable Yukiru fluff Great descriptions Yay Water ride XD The end part was pretty interesting Ways to improve: Work on spacing ~Myst
MysticSorceror 2008-07-30 ch 5,	abuseThings I liked: Nice way to start the chapter with excellent descriptions Oh the Tokyo Annual Festival sounds like lots of fun You can rent beaches o.O I'm excited to read more ~Myst
MysticSorceror 2008-07-27 ch 4,	abuseThings I liked: Fantastic descriptions Adorable Yukiru scene XD Ways to improve: Try not to repeat words or phrases Sweet chapter ~Myst Things that I didn't like: Sorry I dislike HanaxHaru because I'm a HUGE HaruxRin fan Pace is a littel fast
MysticSorceror 2008-07-23 ch 3,	abuseThings I liked: Aww cute character interactions Excellent descriptions Poor Akito-kun, I sympathise with him/her Good way to end the chapter Ways to improve: Make a new line each time a different character speaks Try not to repeat words or phrases Try to find other ways to refer to the characters than just first names ~Myst
MysticSorceror 2008-07-23 ch 2,	abuseThings I liked: Aww fantastic writing style I loved the Yukiru moment, - they're so adorable together Excellent characterisations Aww his phone is so cute ^-^ Can't wait to read more ~Myst
MysticSorceror 2008-07-23 ch 1,	abuseThings I liked: Excellent descriptions Aww the Yukiru in this is so adorable It's good how you mention the changes Perfect character voice Very sweet ~Myst Things that I didn't like: Author notes
yukiXtohru818 2007-11-29 ch 21,	abuseola! i may appear as a new reviewer, but i read all of your stories. i forgot the other chapter you and Yuki's Adorable Gilfriend wrote. but it was really good! can you please say hi to yuki's adorable girlfriend for me? i'm a really big fan of yuki's adorable girlfriend and yours too. please update soon! what's gonna happen in the next chappie? i remember akito syin' that she does'nt want tohru in the jyuunishi's lives after graduation. is she going to accept the scholarship in italy? if she will, (i think i got somethin' in my eye! sobs) she's gonna leave yuki? but i don't like those kind of stories! but sometimes i do! it makes more suspense. oh, don't worry, im not like those other reviewers out there that when you put cliffies, they don't review anmore, ill review always, promise! hehe, sorry if im like this and sorry if im making a nuisance out of myself. im acting like kagura! damn those moodswings!
Yanidee 2007-08-07 ch 21,	abusei just started reding this story and i love it it's a shame you havent continued it i hope one of these days even if it has been one year that you do update it
Sayain Girl 2006-12-11 ch 6,	abuseDemon in Japanesse is Youkai not Mononoke

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