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UnluckyWriter
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
cute and funny, keep up the good work! =3
thfourteenth
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
AHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD this is sho furnie (:

oh well, ryomomo is eww to me, i mean they are kinda inoocent best friends... atomomo? well, i reckon they dun even know each other... XD no offense.
Tsukinori Kaze
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
Saa...this is delightful. Your right, this pairing is addictive. If I weren't such an avid Thrill Pair fan I must just switch teams...
The Illustrious Phantasmagoria
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
Your fanfic has just made my day. . . :)

I thank you for that. . But really. . . “You deprive me of sleeping hours whenever you get all horny. Like now.”
That was priceless. xD And Ryoma does kinda have a point,
“I’m twelve years old, so that technically makes me a child. And you’re a super rich guy, who spoils me in return for sexual satisfaction.”
But wtf. AtoRyo is snarky love!! :DD But. . . Ryoma doesn't have to say "KARUPIN" in such a disturbing way. It makes me think of Karupin as SEME. . .
Riyoku-kun
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
I love this pairing. Its just too cute! ^^
I hope you write more, there's really not enough out there. ;_;
Cheska
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
Yes, there should be more AtoRyo pairings! ^_^
m3ow-chan
2007-10-06 . chapter 1
XD Wonderful story! Really well written!
Mikky-mail
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
OMFG! Does Ryoma's parents know that he has a horny boyfriend?! XD
This is the first AtobexRyoma fic that i ever read and i'm already starting to fall for this pairing!^_^
Make more plz!
unexpectedly awesome
2007-08-04 . chapter 1
you know what? this is the first AtoRyo fic i've ever read and i can't believe that it actually works. 0_0 write more please! i love these guys too. (by the way, i totally agree with you on MomoRyo--i don't like it at all -_-)
mandarin'peel
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
aw XD

haha the summary made me crack up.

but atobe's reaction to pitfall number 3 is even more funny XD

im slowly falling in love with atoryo now >.
To Destination
2007-01-06 . chapter 1
its good
Chakura
2005-07-27 . chapter 1
aww cuteness just pure cuteness lol love the line "If im a child molester what does that make you? Sore" that was hilarious.
FireStarter101
2005-07-20 . chapter 1
I read this a while ago, but I forgot to review! Good job. I loved it, it was well done!
Cicerous
2005-07-20 . chapter 1
Oh, how lucky of me to find this ^^. I recently got the urge to read atobexryo and sanadaxryo fics, only to be disappointed. Not many are out there unfortunatly. This however...well, this story raises my spirits quite a deal, what with it being so wonderfully written. Awesome job, hope to see more from you.
firedraygon
2005-07-17 . chapter 1
'Oh yeah, I just noticed that a lot of AtoRyo fics involves waking up on Atobe’s bed. I wonder why.'

Because it's just so FUN to put him there. XDD

This is so great! Hee, I love that you love AtoRyo. And I'm in the same boat with the non-support of MomoRyo. >_> But AtoMomo? XD; I haven't tried reading that yet.

We, great job capturing Atobe's huge ego. Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97
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