Reviews for The Way it was meant to be

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PurpleHime 2007-03-04 ch 10,	abusei'm gonna cry! this story is so swet!! i love it so much! thank you for tis beautiful story!! aw... thank you!
Kat Angel711 2006-11-10 ch 10,	abuseAw...its over...;; But I liked the ending! What better way for Syaoran to say he loves Sakura by Toya about to beat him to a plup! lol! Anyway, great fiction! Maybe you can make a sequal?
SweetStories11 2006-11-03 ch 10,	abusei finally got to read it all!! it had such a wonderful ending! i really liked this story- but - this quarter i've taken a creative writing class and i want to help you write better :) you've got a great start at writing- and sometimes you describe what the character is thinking/feeling, but the things i recommend you don't do anymore is the author's notes during the chapter... it's really distracting. also, the conscience parts are not needed... and it makes the writing choppy, jumpy from one p.o.v to the next. if you can write it well enough, the reader will know that it's Li thinking and not Kinomoto ^^ and i read once that it's okay to write ** first drafts, but then go back and revise until it's really good. use descriptive detail, and maybe not so much dialogue. it can get kind of dull if the reader reads a chapter that is mostly just conversation, that's like a play i guess. i'm not saying at all that i didn't love your story, I DID! i thought it was a refreshing way to look at the pairing and i loved the dance and how they came together. the twist with her kissing him at the dance was well played out too, especially with the foreshadowing before they leave the house to go! "i hope she doesn't get hurt again" like i've said, the more you write, the more you'll learn how to write WELL. i wish you all of the best of luck in future stories! remember my advice, and if anything, PM me for more. i'm happy to help... in spare time that is! i'm so busy now lol -Monika-
Tsanayi-Sama 2006-10-15 ch 10,	abuseThis is the best chapter I've ever read! I almost cried too, this is such an awesome chapter I'm speechless, I just..just...LOVE IT SO MUCH! My favourite part was the end, everything was perfect, and everything was the way it was meant to be, this is my most favourite CCS story ever!
kenshinlover2002 2006-10-08 ch 10,	abuseI loved it, everything became good in the end for Sakura.
-Kori Kage Tenshi- 2006-10-08 ch 10,	abusethat was a kawaii ending. ^.^
Armageddon Angel 2006-10-08 ch 10,	abuseI am going to be honest with you. I did not like ending. You fell into the plot device that confession makes everything better. I like the beginning so much and for this to end like this just made everything fall through. I don't know how to make this review kind and I really don't want you to get the wrong impression that I am a mean person, but that is how I feel about this ending.
takari love 2006-10-07 ch 10,	abuseWow, happy ending...^^ I love it...^.^
Jiade-103 2006-10-07 ch 10,	abuseThat was a great story!.. more please lmfao Jiade
xxChOCOhOLiCxx 2006-10-07 ch 10,	abuseaw! the story ended.
koga hater975 2006-10-07 ch 1,	abusethat was so good.sendme more please
rawritskim 2006-10-07 ch 9,	abuseyay happy ending-insured LOL x]
Musette Fujiwara 2006-10-07 ch 10,	abuseso it ends in such a magnific way... I liked it... It was so sad at the beginning and then happy I loved the whole story...
May 2006-10-05 ch 9, anon.	abuseHey (= i love your story. Is it still active though...? =\
Kat Angel711 2006-09-24 ch 9,	abuseYay! You took my advise with the flashback break-up scene between Emi and Syaoran! Thank you! Oh, and don't feel bad about calling Emi a **, cause she is one! -Laughs- Anyway, I hope you update soon!

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