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speadee 2007-09-21 ch 8,	abuseGood story! I was scared, thinking it was something serious. Well, some things that are trivial to us can be serious to others. Good job showing that! I also like how you had it in Yuuta's POV instead of the usual Syusuke. It was something different. The siblings interaction is good, too. FFNet doesn't seem to allow links in stories. Even worse, it also changes some of the formatting and rejects some symbols when you upload a story or chapter. I had quite a bit of struggle with it when I loaded the first chapter of my 1st fanfic. I had to keep editing and replacing the chapters because of the picky and confusing functions.
Fightingdreamer5 2005-11-06 ch 8,	abuseAw, cute, you should continue after 'Aftermath'
Fightingdreamer5 2005-11-06 ch 5,	abuseAhh! Poor Fuji! And I know how Yuuta feels, there is a list very similar to that in my house, 'The list of things that Taylor my stupid sister) is better at than Jacey (me)' I swear the list just keeps going!
yamatoforever 2005-08-21 ch 8,	abuseYou're really got me here. So it was Momoshiro. Hmm, at least it wasn't a more serious matter like what I thought before. So a simple apologize could washed all the problem away. One good thing from all this is that now the brotherhood in the Fuji's is grow tighter than before. Good story really (eventhough I want to read about Tezuka's reaction about this matter >_
Evening Lilacs 2005-08-20 ch 8,	abuseCool story! Inui and his data obsession was funny, and Tezuka stood out as well-characterized for even the brief time he appeared.
Thekoryu 2005-08-19 ch 8,	abuseI can't imagine reading this story without it being complete @@ Kudos to those reviewers of yours who've been around since the beginning. A very orginal plotline and VERY well written. I was pulled in from the beginning and you strung the reader along well...darn you. _ _* I'd LOVE to see this story from Fuji's POV as well. Again, Nice job. :D Sincerely, Koryu
Ranma064 2005-08-16 ch 8, anon.	abusetwitch twitchn THAT was the END?! The end of the chapter or the story? Please tell me! E-mail me with the answer okay? Cause if thats the end of the STORY then I'm disappointed! I thought Fuji may have gotten d or something! I love those stories ...
yamatoforever 2005-08-16 ch 7,	abuseAs much as I was glad that everything would be clear in the new chapter, it's sadden me that it would be the last chapter in this story. The story has become my favourite story since I found it and you also as my favourite author. Oh well, there's no party with an end ne? Hmm, Inui's question make me back to the conclusion that it was Kawamura (in his burning state) that had hurted Fuji because of his jealousy that Fuji Loves someone else (Tezuka perhaps?). But luckily eventhough he harrassed Fuji (physically and maybe even sexually) it didn't go too far or else Fuji would be in much worse condition because of his depress and fear. Perhaps Kawamura in his normal state apologized to Fuji and promised him it won't happen again so Fuji choosed not to say anything for Kawamura's sake. Hey, since it would be the last chapter would you give Tezuka a chance to make an appearance? I want to know his reaction about this matter. Oh well, I'll gonna read the new chapter right now. I'll review later. Uhm, just a thought. Perhaps after this story end you would consider to write it in the victim's eyes. I like Yuuta pov in this story. It's so Yuuta. But I think it would be interesting to read it again in Fuji pov. Fuji is not a simple boy. It would be nice to take a peek inside his head. Like his surprised and feared when he was attacked. And surely he was touched that Yuuta cares so much about him. So then I could read this story again in a different pov. ^_~ Or if you won't do it, please consider to write an epilogue or even a sequel. Pretty pretty please. >_
PS Aagain 2005-08-16 ch 8,	abuseI really don't know what to say. I guess I expected something more. I kept waiting and waiting for the climax and then suddenly it's ended. - No, don't get upset yet, that's not the end of my review - I really thought about it then, and in a way, that's what you'd expect. Misunderstandings get all blown out of proportion and then you find out that it was really nothing. And that's how you portrayed it in this fic. It was just all a silly misunderstanding. So that was cool. Also, rereading the story, I guess it all adds, up, Fuji's sore wrist - maybe Momo grabbed him or something. That'd be a very Momo type thing to do. Grabbing Fuji in the heat of his emotions. That's my guess anyway. I like the way you deviated from typical cliched scenarios. To tell you the truth I thought he'd been raped or something, but I like how you gave this a different slant. It definitely wasn't what I was imagining, but that's why I liked it. I especially like the last few lines, knowing that Yuuta and Fuji's relationship will have a chance to grow. You've done well in this fic. Keep writing, I believe you'll only get better. Good luck!
tezuka eiri 2005-08-15 ch 8,	abuseThis is the end?? It feels so anti-climax. I was expecting something big. I feel so unsatisfied with the ending.
Lady Light 2005-08-15 ch 8,	abusesmiles sadly and dreamily Ah.. sibling bonds... misunderstandings... I wish alot of things were as easy to forgive... I really liked this.. you should write more. Because of your writing, I've liked Yuuta even more.
Lady Light 2005-08-09 ch 7,	abuseI fell sorry for the Fuji family... Yumiko, Yuuta, and Syuusuke... I like em all ^_^
yamatoforever 2005-08-08 ch 6,	abuseI like the phrase that Yumiko used, an angry puppy guarding its master. That's really suit what Yuuta did since Fuji came to him. ^_^ Hmm, somehow I think Eiji didn't just want to watch a movie with Fuji. Maybe he notices too that something is wrong with his best friend, that the cheerful mask Fuji showed was much forced. So Eiji wants to hang out with Fuji to persuade him to tell what's wrong. Eventhough that Yumiko knew now, I don't think Fuji would tell her what's happen to him. But I would love to read her tries. Please post the next chapter quickly!
yamatoforever 2005-08-02 ch 5,	abuseIt seems that Fuji's injury took a longer time to heal. Make me wonder what had he been through. I suspect to hear from Inui soon, a meeting with Yuuta. Perhaps including Tezuka on it. After all, Inui has a reputation that he must keep, as a good and terriying data man! Oh well, I'll gonna read the new chapter right now. I'll review later.
Lady Light 2005-07-31 ch 6,	abuseah... Yumiko's such a caring sister! Maybe I should stop picking on my brothers for all the mistakes they make... -.-

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