This is getting more intense. I love it.

Mr. Incredible should not die...it would kill the movie

VIOLET GOT MARRIED IN AGE 18 ?

Sorry but I really can't stand people who marry in an early age...But you know Britney kinda sounds like my sister..

I can’t believe that Mr. Incredible is dead. Whoever sent Ragnarok is going to have to deal with Mr. Incredible II’s wrath! The song made me want to cry

This is such a great start. It almost reminds me of the begining of the movie! Great job so far

Wow, great chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for taking my idea for Violet's suit. Update ASAP (or else) Just kidding.

Well, I think that Dash's supersuit should be blue with a yello lightning bolt on the front, and yes I do think that britney should come with them! Great chapter! Update very VERY soon please!

Well, i will help you on the super suits. I only have a new suit idea for Violet. Here it goes. Violet wears blue, purple tights. She also wears purple gloves and boots, that go halfway up her thiegh. Also, she wears a pink head band and a pink belt. Cool chap though.

Hey man, waiting for your next chapter. Can't wait for an update. (hey, that rhymes)

Nice job on the newsbreak. I like the idea. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Great chapter. I'm understanding it a little bit. Great job anyways

Sounds to me like good ol' Dash has an Oedipus complex.

i dont understand it. its a little fast and i cant get why they say some stuff they say. but i love the action!

Great chapter! Update very VERY soon please!

Great chapter! Update very VERY soon please!