Touching! The repetition of "Flower Girl" at the end of the odd lines was great (I'm assuming, since it's in a pattern, you did it for emphasis). Great word usage-lovely piece.

All right, this will be a long review.

1. A.) Shalar says "have you ever heard of Free Verse Poetry? to the person who said it doesn't even rhyme.

1. B.) Shalar looks pensive for a moment and says "Excellent poetry as usual, Ragnarok."

2. A.) Please, people, refrain from outright badmouthing of Ragnarok? _-

Great poem! I liked your alliteration with the word Flower Girl. SOME IDIOTS don't even realize that it's a technique, and in this case, an effective one. I'm not really that much into FF7 poetry, but I read yours because you read mine. :P Again - great job!

that was good...eep.

that did suck. You used 'Flower girl' WAY too much. it would have been better had it rhymed...but that's not really a problem, cuz that's not very important. um...it didn't express a lot of feeling...it was just...i dunno. but quite frankly, it was a waste of my time, and yours.

Dear Anonymous Idiot, I am not one to bad mouth people because they critisize my stuff, but anyone who is too much of a wuss to write down even an alias on a bad review, and not even giving an excuse is obviously not to brigh and/or too shallow to understand anything past 11.

that sucked

This is probably my favorite Final Fantasy poem that I have written. Any other opinions..?

*sniffles* So sad...I loved it! The tone of the poem fits Cloud perfectly. Sparkly (I like that word) job, keep it up! )