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Tatsumaki-sama
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
So happy that they did get together in the end.

//“Did you find what you were looking for?” I asked.

I saw his shadowy figure shrug. I watched as he move a step closer towards me and at last I saw his face in the dim light of the stars. I was shocked to see that he, Kira Yamato, was smiling, lavender eyes peering down at me as he touched my face.

“I just have… ”//

Aww. Yay for Kira x Lacus!
angkat14
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
Could have written it myself, that I could!

Oh boy, that Lacus was me in real life...

Very good in depicting the emotions involved...from someone who went through the same, I could not have described it better than you did...

Fear, it is...but for me, it is fear that when he came back, nothing will be the same again...

I buried myself in work so as not to miss him even more, but at night, even when I'm too tired to do anything but sleep, I can still find time to think and cry...

And, as the song goes, "...Friends ask me how I feel, and I lie convincingly; cause I don't want to reveal the fact that I'm suffering..."

All in all, it was a superb fanfic...I love the emotions even if the characters you used are strangers to me...

Hoping to read more of your writings...

And...adding this to my favorites!
lightning-freedom
2005-10-18 . chapter 1
I dunno wat the story is all about b'cause there's only 1 chapter
Love-seed
2005-08-28 . chapter 1
aH! aww..that was so sweet! lol nice writing! I really really like it
Prince Takeru
2005-08-27 . chapter 1
A sad, but lovely story. I loved the ending...
RazorBoy
2005-08-18 . chapter 1
I still thought it was very sweet...
Wallpaper
2005-07-24 . chapter 1
simple, short and sweet. nice beginning, loved the descriptice writing and the ending made me smile.
KiraTatashi
2005-07-23 . chapter 1
YIPEE! GREAT FANFIC! AND UPDATE^^
Kintora
2005-07-19 . chapter 1
Hmm... Yes, I would agree that it couldn't be "happy" but it felt more reassuring than anything else. Being said goodbye to won't be too bad so long as hello will come after it someday. That's what makes waiting sound more worthwhile, but I think what you do in between also has to be worthwhile too. Wallowing doesn't help, putting up a mask doesn't help, feeling trapped doesn't help; but if the person steps forward, a step at a time, waiting will not seem like waiting at all.

Okay, I should shut up. Here's what happens when I contemplate. @@

Sweet oneshot by the way. ~^ Glad it wasn't a one way street and a walk with pure sadness. :) I felt better to hear of a comforting end. :3
MindLezz
2005-07-19 . chapter 1
Beautiful. :)
Ichigo Engine
2005-07-16 . chapter 1
happy or not...i always love your fics. please write more ofd them!
MyouseiSeed
2005-07-16 . chapter 1
I just have...?

Yeah! Please update soon! Kira Yamato+Lacus Clyne and the #1 couple Athrun Zala+Cagalli Yula Attha (yeah #1!( they rock!!)
Joey
2005-07-15 . chapter 1
confused i am, yes. good though, i think.
Golaitz
2005-07-15 . chapter 1
Another perfect score for yuugiri!!

Really sweet story, hope you make some more stories and updates!! ^_^
jenniferseedlover
2005-07-15 . chapter 1
that was very interesting.. ^_^.. i'm going to wait for the next update... ^_^ ja ne!
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