Reviews for Simple Little Things

Reviews For: Simple Little Things

Meng Yuan Sun 2007-05-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseJesus! What were you THINKING? It's bloody brilliant!
wellduh... 2005-07-22 ch 3, anon.	abuseI have to say, the third chapter made me grin. In an "I can just see this happening and oh how much fun that wouold have been" way. Great work.
LadyRhiyana 2005-07-17 ch 3, anon.	abuseNo! You can kill Sesshoumaru like you did in chapter 2, but not like this... I see what you mean about going against your fangirl instincts. Honestly, it was a diabolical piece; I think you've traumatised me for life.
Anna's pastime 2005-07-17 ch 3,	abuseOh my god that was so creepy! No, poor Sesshoumaru! Okay, I've calmed down now. You did a find job with the AR. I loved picturing Naraku in the end posing as Sesshoumaru. The part where Sess attempted to transform and Naraku took him was terrible and oh so nice at the same time. Next time I see that episode I'm going to worry about poor Sess.
drake220 2005-07-17 ch 2,	abuseyou and your ending lines! excellent!
drake220 2005-07-17 ch 1,	abusethat ending line was great! The ficlet itself was a bit confusing as there were oddly placed capitalized letters (i got why you did it though) and the language was a little vague. However, it had great impact! nicely done!
LadyRhiyana 2005-07-14 ch 2, anon.	abuseI've always liked your portrayal of Sesshoumaru, and of Sesshoumaru and Rin. The first (short? drabble? ficlet?) was very interesting, I liked the thought of having greater freedom in the 'true' form. I also agree that Sesshoumaru seemed to lose control when he transformed in his father's tomb, and it did him absolutely no good. (What good is a 3-legged dog? lol!) And the second ficlet was just...terribly sad. But wonderful all the same. I think I'll have to read it a few more times to get the full meaning.
Anna's pastime 2005-07-14 ch 2,	abuseI loved the first short, it was highly unique. I had never thought of the possibility of Sess running wild in his true form for long periods and then being forced to mold himself into another...it does explain his perpetually constipated look. Very creative. And the second one shot really hit me hard. I loved it! Had to read it over twice to make certain I was getting everything (still may not be, my cognitve abilities are not what they once were). You wrote: "I have had much time to study her." What a very true sounding Sess line. And, Rin thinking, "Is that what he saw..." referring to the children's faces, was so sad. Yes, perhaps that was what he saw. Aww. One thing that crossed my mind near the end was that you were questioning the nature of love itself, since Sess was going to a lot of trouble to deny that youkai could ever even come close to feeling that thing called 'love'. And yet his outward actions were so indicitive of the feeling.

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