I am loving every single one of your stories, thank you so much!

This is a really great look at the events that happened beneath the surface in Moebius. I always wished we could have seen a little more of the "original" or "first non-original" team's decisions, etc.

I also like the hint of Sam/Jack.

Thanks!

This story is an example of the brilliance of fanfiction. You have written the bits we never got to see and it was absolutely inspired!

hey! please don't end the story like that! its a really good story...at least give it a good ending...please!

im begging you...pretty pretty please :(

Brilliant. Great story.

I would absolutely love it if you changed your mind and decided to continue with this. Maybe go further with the future group in the past (if that makes any sense!)

But it is of course, your story, and you can do with it what you will. Just letting you know that if you kept going, you'd have at least my attention and reviews!

Great story, anyway. I loved it.

I love these whispers of their lives the way they should be. The nagging sense that there should be something more happening than is.

Great chapter. Love the story.

I am so far behind!

But I will catch up.

Great chapter, by the way.

Really wonderful story, Kellifer. There were so many emotional shifts in this, and each ripple could have easily made its own story, but it worked beautifully the way it is.

Wow... excellent chapter! I love how you go beteween both realities. And nice descriptions as well.

Wonderful chapter! And event though I knew to expect that middle part, it was sad none the less! I am really enjoying how you are presenting this story and look forward to each update.

Oh no, you can't end it there. How about how they really fix the timeline? Don't you want to tell us what you think happened? What happened after Jack ahnd Sam kissed in the puddlejumper? Please?

You are definately keeping my brain working here. Great story !

aw, poor jack. more please

poor sam. poor jake. i love the way you give the 3 time periods in each chapter