cool

... Nice. I like this one, it's good.

That was a awesome story I really like how you also included kyubi but its kyuubi. That was the best story I reviewed. You are a great author and when you grow up you can make some really good story's. Make some more! But with less chapters.

it was a very good story and suprisingly well written for being so short.

This story is all most perfect so I gave this story a rating of 4.5 out of 5 stars on 'FavoritesTracker org' under the acct:EvilDaveCanada

well, i like it, but your throwing in too many japanese words. this is the english section of the site you know.

Well done, I really like the way you write. It flows very nicely. It was unusual for me to read a fic where hiashi was a nice guy to Hinata. Also, it was nice to see Hinata's mom still alive. Anyway, I am off to read the sequel.

love it!

love it

hiashi's wife is dead. thats why hiashi puts so much pressure on hinata. she died during hanabi's birth

Awesome. Only word in most peoples vocabulary that i can use (i know a few german words like it, but...)

Olay wah...LOOKIT THE SIZE OF THAT BUCK! (BANG) Hehe anyway that was interesting...Naruto goes berserk, then sits down in front of Hinata like a loyal dog...anywhoo, you should be honored. Only on rare circumstances do I review before the latest chapter.

So I've wanted to review this story for like ever! I'm basically in love with this story! My first favorite paring was NaruHina. I love how you made it that Naruto and Hinata don't just fall in love and everything is perfect. They struggle and go through things that everyone goes through and I love that! One of the best ever!

amazing story, great addition of the 128 palm and kyuubi descriptions.

all of this was amazing and i loved every second of it. i liked the naruto and hinata bits alot and i beg you to keep on writing more! this stuff is like 20 times better then the manga :D