i like it so far can't wait to read the rest!

great job

That was the best! I luv highschool fics! Can you tell me the name of the song Nick was singing cos I've been trying to get it since "Grave Danger".

Hey, I think you should leave it there. Yah finished it off people think that good things should neverend, but good things are always ending, and you wrapped this up all nice with a sparkly bow on top.

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“Do you have to check with your parents?”

“No,” Sara blurted quickly. Grissom thought she looked sad, even frightened, for a moment, but when he looked again, she looked fine, so he decided to ignore it for the time.

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Hello opportunity for a sequel, how very nice too see you. Hint hint, nudge nudge ;)

hey! was that ya first time? because that was great! my 1 (assumptions) isnt at all good but i thought id post it for the fun of it! :) i thought yours was very discriptive and imaginative. if ya write some more like this then i may post it on my site! (

This was a great story. The Yahoo challenge group is GSR.

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that was so cute! even if it was grissom/sara! as you know i honestly don't like them together but you made it cute, so its bearable. great job and i think you should continue it! its a good story!

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*cries* I am gone for six days and you finish! Anyway, I loved it...

So far I love this story, but I wanted 2 review b4 I forget what i wanted 2 say. You said Nick just transferred from Texas, but he said that he has plated football with the jocks for years. Just wanted to point it out. Great Story!

NO! Don't end the story! I LOVE it! alright, if you want to end it it's okay, but it's just so PERFECT! Sara and Grissom were meant to be together. I think I'll stop watching CSI(except the reruns)if it ever ends up being something else. Unless it was like when Sara was with Hank, where she just found out that she needed Grissom and only Grissom(in my opinion). I really think Nick needs to be in a couple more episodes that focus on him a little bit more. Cause we need to see him more often!

Hey! Excellent job with the story! I absolutely love it! I definately think that you should continue with the story! Keep up the good work!

It is so good! But you didn't write about Greg going to the dance. how come? Anyway, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue as soon as you can! I'm addicted!

LeaH

PS

PLEASE!

IF U DONT CONTINUE I WILL PERSONALLY KILL U UNTIL UR FRIKIN

DEAD

It's really good! I'm obsessed with CSI, and i've seen every episode and let me just say this is perfect! I love it how everyone has a match in here. But can I just ask, why did you put Jamie and Veronica in it? I love it, but why? Well, keep writing!

xoxo

Leah