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| speadee 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThat is true. The best player isn't determined by just winning, but a few other things. Good job showing that the best player doesn't always win, because many factors contribute to winning. It's good you had Fuji said that along with winning: shows he's a prodigy. Besides, one person can't always remain the best player. People and situations change. |
| fuji-addict 2007-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice Fuji! Hehehe...What a beautiful fic...Short, simple, but very enlightening... It's not also OOC because Echizen does tend to become self-assured especially after he defeated the number one junior tennis player, Sanada...And Fuji is just the right person to teach him that lesson since out of the Tennis players in POT, I believe he is the most insightful and he truly wants to help his friends grow... |
| aPeurDeFISH1412 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseSo Ryoma did eventually beat Tezuka... Speaking of which, which episode is the last episode of the anime? I just want to know. As mentioned, it does make you wonder if Fuji played his best against Tezuka... Nice Fic! |
| wired 2005-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseCHALLENGE: WRITE A FANFIC (rYOMA X FUJI OF COURSE!) HOWEVER I THINK U SHOULD DEFINITELY MAKE RYOMA THE SEME THIS TYM...I MEAN I THINK THE FUJI SHOULD BE DOMINATED FOR ONCE.. I DON'T THINK RYOMA IS THE TYPE OF PERSON WHO'LL LET ANYONE MAKE HIM A PUSH OVER...HE IS VERY COMPETITIVE SO.. I DON'T THINK HE'LL WANT TO BE AT THE BOTTOM...HE IS THE PRINCE OF TENNIS WHO WANTS TO BE ON TOP...AT TENNIS OR IN BED FOR ONCE DON'T CHA THINk SO? I MEAN FUJI IS A BISHOUNEN SO HE'LL FIT THE PART AS THE UKE...HE IS VERY DOMINANT BUT HAVING A STORY THAT SHOWS THAT HE ISN'T ALWAYS AT THE TOP OR I N CONTROL IS INTRIGUING! DIFFERENT FROM DA OTHER FICS I'VE READ...I MEAN FUJI'S PRETTY!!.WELL...THAT'S WHAT I THINK...IF YOU'RE UP FOR IT...email me at SO TO ALL DA DARING AUTHORS/WRITERS/RYOMAXFUJI FANS I DARE YA! |
| Evening Lilacs 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseGood fic. The concept was simple, but it was shown in an abstract way. "It was as though they were holding their breath, waiting to see what would happen now that the natural order of things (Ryoma is better than Tezuka is better than Fuji is better than everyone else) had been so disrupted." *points above* Good line. Peace, Lilacs |
| Silver Sniper 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abusePriceless... I love this story! |
| Tedian 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseLoved the fic, *this* is how they should have ended PoT ;-).Can't agree more on this little bit: "To his credit, Ryoma didn't get angry. He didn't cry (not that anyone would have expected him to) or fall to his knees as though he'd just lost a battle and was about to be executed." Of course, if you added *my* personal take on the irritating habit, "as though prepared to go down on the victor", it would probably upped the rating ;-) |
| yamatoforever 2005-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's make me wonder if Fuji had played with all his power when he played with Tezuka. But it is a good lesson indeed. So Ryoma would learns to not underestimate anyone just because everyone (and himself) thinks he is a better player than his opponent. |
| Lady Light 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuseFuuji ^_^ |
| Craze Izumi 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuseShort but nice will there be an update I do hope so...XD |