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Soccer-Bitch
2007-01-01
ch 9,
abuseawesome story. very well-written.
CatherineLouise
2006-04-09
ch 9,
abuse*gasp* How mean! Heartbreaking! Ah, that's life eh? Really fun story...um up until the ending! I liked it anyway! I won't throw any rotten fruit, no worries.

In one of your replies to my review one of you asked how I had stumbled upon your work. To tell the truth I did just that - I was surfing the CSI:NY story page and took a chance on Temperature. Now I'm hooked!
Elainhe
2006-01-07
ch 9,
abuseI finally got the time to read this. The ending is certainly unexpected (in spite of the fact that I read all the warnings beforehand!), but in that it seems rather true to real life. So, on a writing level I liked how you managed to create the shock effect. No build up to it, no hints, nothing.

I haven't read many fics written in first person - liked that too.

Shivers? Yes, yes, yes! Thank you.

And I just have to say I loved the 'say my name' bits!
Loopey-Laura
2005-11-29
ch 9,
abuse*puts down tomato* It was suprising ending. A little upsetting but i understand why you had to end it the way you did. I won't hold it against you lol. It was a good ending i have to admit. :)
JenTWCSINYFAN
2005-11-29
ch 9,
abuseWah. loved the whole thing and im sorry it ended that way
Jen
Quoth-the-Raven-03
2005-11-28
ch 9,
abuseI hate you...I was all worked up and scrolling along and bam, you just slap me right in the face. Nah, I really do not hate you, but I do appauled you for an excellent story!!A great and entertaining read, with a twisted and gut-renching ending. Cheer!
MrsGiovinazzo
2005-11-28
ch 9,
abuseNo! You did NOT just end my favorite story that way. That sucked and, right now, I just might be hating you. But since Danny got lucky in the preceeding chapter, I guess I can forgive you. Great story. I'm sad to see it come to an end. Siobhan was a great character and I loved the dynmanics between her, Danny and Aidan. It was really well-written from start to finish.
MrsGiovinazzo
2005-11-22
ch 8,
abuseThanks for writing chapter 8. This remains one of my very favorite stories. Big fat smoochies to you for finally giving a girl what she wants. This chapter rocks!
Tigerlily06
2005-11-18
ch 8,
abuseI can safely say that it looks like the writer's block has evaporated...

Man! What you've done in this chapter is almost criminal...

Had to find a freezing river to wash away my impure thoughts...

Very good and well worth the wait...

Please say more is coming...
Tigerlily06
2005-10-12
ch 7,
abuseI so like this story...

It's sassy and ballsy and just pure fun to read...

I hope the dry spell ends soon because I can't wait to see where this going to end up at...

And, I agree... Danny Messer is so hot!
MrsGiovinazzo
2005-10-01
ch 7,
abuseI've been missing this story. It's one of my favorites. Cute flirtation between Siobhan and Mac, but damn I am just dying to see where things go with Danny. Please, please, please write more!
ArodLoverus2001
2005-10-01
ch 7,
abusegreat chapter! can't wait 4 more plz update soon!
stfrench
2005-08-22
ch 6,
abuseI just love this story and the dialogues are great! I have been mentally willing you to write more, more, more as I am dying to see what happens between Danny and Siobhan. But I suppose that, like many things in life, the longer it lasts, the better it is! ;-)
ArodLoverus2001
2005-08-16
ch 6,
abuseLOL danny's evil! great chapter! can't wait 4 more plz update soon!
MrsGiovinazzo
2005-08-15
ch 6,
abuseMore! More! More! Please tell me Siobhan is the kind of girl who puts out on the first date. Kidding. I absolutely love this story, Siobhan's character and the dialogue. It's so fun and flirty.
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