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| Soccer-Bitch 2007-01-01 ch 9, | abuseawesome story. very well-written. |
| CatherineLouise 2006-04-09 ch 9, | abuse*gasp* How mean! Heartbreaking! Ah, that's life eh? Really fun story...um up until the ending! I liked it anyway! I won't throw any rotten fruit, no worries. In one of your replies to my review one of you asked how I had stumbled upon your work. To tell the truth I did just that - I was surfing the CSI:NY story page and took a chance on Temperature. Now I'm hooked! |
| Elainhe 2006-01-07 ch 9, | abuseI finally got the time to read this. The ending is certainly unexpected (in spite of the fact that I read all the warnings beforehand!), but in that it seems rather true to real life. So, on a writing level I liked how you managed to create the shock effect. No build up to it, no hints, nothing. I haven't read many fics written in first person - liked that too. Shivers? Yes, yes, yes! Thank you. And I just have to say I loved the 'say my name' bits! |
| Loopey-Laura 2005-11-29 ch 9, | abuse*puts down tomato* It was suprising ending. A little upsetting but i understand why you had to end it the way you did. I won't hold it against you lol. It was a good ending i have to admit. :) |
| JenTWCSINYFAN 2005-11-29 ch 9, | abuseWah. loved the whole thing and im sorry it ended that way Jen |
| Quoth-the-Raven-03 2005-11-28 ch 9, | abuseI hate you...I was all worked up and scrolling along and bam, you just slap me right in the face. Nah, I really do not hate you, but I do appauled you for an excellent story!!A great and entertaining read, with a twisted and gut-renching ending. Cheer! |
| MrsGiovinazzo 2005-11-28 ch 9, | abuseNo! You did NOT just end my favorite story that way. That sucked and, right now, I just might be hating you. But since Danny got lucky in the preceeding chapter, I guess I can forgive you. Great story. I'm sad to see it come to an end. Siobhan was a great character and I loved the dynmanics between her, Danny and Aidan. It was really well-written from start to finish. |
| MrsGiovinazzo 2005-11-22 ch 8, | abuseThanks for writing chapter 8. This remains one of my very favorite stories. Big fat smoochies to you for finally giving a girl what she wants. This chapter rocks! |
| Tigerlily06 2005-11-18 ch 8, | abuseI can safely say that it looks like the writer's block has evaporated... Man! What you've done in this chapter is almost criminal... Had to find a freezing river to wash away my impure thoughts... Very good and well worth the wait... Please say more is coming... |
| Tigerlily06 2005-10-12 ch 7, | abuseI so like this story... It's sassy and ballsy and just pure fun to read... I hope the dry spell ends soon because I can't wait to see where this going to end up at... And, I agree... Danny Messer is so hot! |
| MrsGiovinazzo 2005-10-01 ch 7, | abuseI've been missing this story. It's one of my favorites. Cute flirtation between Siobhan and Mac, but damn I am just dying to see where things go with Danny. Please, please, please write more! |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-10-01 ch 7, | abusegreat chapter! can't wait 4 more plz update soon! |
| stfrench 2005-08-22 ch 6, | abuseI just love this story and the dialogues are great! I have been mentally willing you to write more, more, more as I am dying to see what happens between Danny and Siobhan. But I suppose that, like many things in life, the longer it lasts, the better it is! ;-) |
| ArodLoverus2001 2005-08-16 ch 6, | abuseLOL danny's evil! great chapter! can't wait 4 more plz update soon! |
| MrsGiovinazzo 2005-08-15 ch 6, | abuseMore! More! More! Please tell me Siobhan is the kind of girl who puts out on the first date. Kidding. I absolutely love this story, Siobhan's character and the dialogue. It's so fun and flirty. |