lol Lavi's gunna get killed XD

Hahaha, this story is so amazing! xD 2nd person is usually kind of awkward, but it fits really well in this. You totally pinned Kanda's character. xD

That was wonderful! Your use of second-person point of view made Kanda's thoughts seem all the more in character and realistic. And Rabi's interference is just hilarious and perfect! hahaha I especially like the little details you included, at the very beginning with Kanda's realization, about Komui and the Finders, Rabi's speech patterns, Kanda and Allen remembering the same event, etc. And the omake was predictably enough funny and ended the story on a sweet note. Thanks so much for posting and writing this!! ^__^

This fic is quite cute. Is this a one-shot or is there a continuation?

wow, that was awesome! I liked it! I always thought that writing in second person is rather difficult but you did it really well. =D the ending was really cute and humorous. ^^

hahaha this is fun. hope u write more

Sweet.Very sweet nice adding with the Rabi and then Kanda. The Omake was awesome! I loved it!

Ah, so good. Kan-chan should do that in cannon.

Wow, this kind of perspective tends to put me on the edge, but I love the way you've used it! I really love KandaAllen, and with Rabi thrown into the mix, it just makes everything so much better~ =D

That was adorable! So fluffy!

i love it~!! it's so cute~!! and sweet~! *gives dokun a BIG hug and ice cream*

Ka-wai-i!! I like it! Write more please! There aren't enough good D. gray-man fics out there!!

Omg. I

GENIUS. BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL GENIUS.

i am LOVING your stories so far, they're so cute! and very well written as well