I just got into this story... YE GODS! This is great! I love how you're giving a whole new dimension to Bonnie! I can't wait to delve into chapter 2!

TK

Well, after putting it off for eaons I read it, and let me just say: It was good. Nice to see a different side of Bonnie.

It finally happened.
I finally got around to reading your Bonnie's Curse universe, a fic I have been putting off for years because it is so LONG.

Wish me luck, and good start.

i just wanted to say i liked the story and from the start i new it would be good just from the plot so i want to thankyou for taking the time to entertain me

and now its time for redemption

Poor Bonnie, thats great thats she's been keeping Rone & Kim safe from harm

I like this laternate take on Bonnie. I will admit that she has never done anything to endear me to her character, and in even the most well-written stories, her 'redemption' comes off as a slow ab laborious process

Your take, at least in my opinion, as that the whole personality is an act. And while there is litte evidence in the source material to support that, there isn't much that contradicts it either.

So, taking the story on faith, I can see myself starting to like Bonnie.

I do think that the leap from 'High School evil' Bonnie to 'Kim & Ron's friend' Bonnie was a bit too quick, but that is a matter of personal taste, and I know you had to get into the 'Story Proper' as soon as possible without losing readers.

The brisk pacing, makes this story an easy read, and I can fit several chapters into an afternoon, or lunch break.

Keep up the good work, I look forward to the remainder of the stories.

OMG! I have to read Redemption RIGHT NOW! This story had the perfect ending - Kim didn't magically wake up in a twirl of mystical romance, but she's going through this just as a reall person would. And I love the way you described the library in Bonnie's mind, I would have never imagined something like that! You are such a great author!

mangafangirl :)

"Of course there was that time with the body switching... uhh... better not remind KP about that. Even I'm a little embarrassed by that. I mean, it's not like I wanted to look... yeah right... but I did have to change!"

That was more than a little awkward... but a very good story, none the less! You make me jealous of your writing skills!

mangafangirl :)

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Great story there cheif! It had everything psychics, monkeys, fighting, dream worlds, and angst. It was a really good read top notch.

This piece is simply amazing. Yes, like you, I am attracted to the secondary characters and especially Bonnie. This is a thoughtful, original work that touches so many points and looks through so many facets, that once I started to read it, it was simply impossible to stop. Your technique of jumping from 1st to 3rd person and back as needed lent a sense of urgency and intimacy where it was needed.

Excellent work

The Wise Duck

good story! Never expected to see Bonnie in this light. Makes me think of her as a hero. ^_^ Keep on writing

-Nezitsuki