This was really very well done. I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. I loved seeing Tatsuha like this. Sometimes it's hard to remember that he's still only a teenager. I absolutely adored the interactions between Eiri and Tatsuha and the ending was beautiful.

Wow. This... this is a great fic.
Being used to your funny humor fics this was a big change. They say changes are good... and I agree.
Everyone was in character, and the plot was great. I felt a little sad for Tatsuha, who wants to act like an adult yet still feels and thinks like a tenager, and wants someone to tell him what will happen next.
Very insightful, very interesting and really amazing fic.
As usual. I don't know why I'm surprised at all.

'Till next fic
Anais

aw...that was sad. But it was really good too.

It's unusual to imagine a situation in which Tatsuha and Eiri are required to be serious with one another. You did a nice job with that. Great little "portrait" fic; does not need to be continued because it works just perfectly the way it is. :) Nice short fic, as always.

Excellent story--am waiting to read the rest.

i love the mood you put into this. it's perfect. exspecially the way tatsuha and eiri speak to each other. you should continue this for maybe another chapter or so, i think it would be good. but oh well.. it's nice the way it is.

Good fic.
I loved how everything was centered aroung Tatsuha and not the other characters, you don't usually find fics focussed on him.
All the characters were kept in character which was amazing. I can never keep them in character in situations like that.
.kisses.