It reminds me of that scene in the first chapter of the manga of Ikari Shinji Raising Project.

WAFF? what is WAFF? if you mean ooc-ness, then yes. I mean, lets face the light here, asuka does not change, and will not change. Its a good thing she died, cause the fans would have been more pissed at how nothing acutally changes. She is the ETEEERNAL TSUNDERE!

This was a good story, it doesn't mater if you're about to go insane. (Read author's notes.) My preferred genre is romance and WAFF in NGE, so its tops in my book. Kudos.

P.S. Yeah, I know, a guy liking WAFF and romance, but watcha gonna do, right? lol

I think that you had Asuka's characterisation done very well. I also found parts such as, "Touji and Kensuke, as they were friends with Shinji, did what most other males did to help cheer their friends up. Teased them mercilessly." very witty and amusing. One of the best one shot romances I have read in a long time. Keep up the good work

If it is WAFF, it is very good WAFF. if you are trying to make it something else, it isn't working. very sweet and well written otherwise.

it's nice, it's cute, it was a fun read. well anyways, that's all from me

Cheers Ja ne

Awesome SxA, but it didn't stick to the summary. Too bad. Meh, it was good.

Cheerio,

Naon

Very cute. You're good at WAFF. I especially liked Hikari and the ear twist of doom!

man thats so good keep on writing on this one please

U should make another chapter was cute!

That was so cute! Loved it.

I absolutely object! This is not pointless! It, in fact, is a very nice fic...4 am? Not my kind of time...though I was wondering how you got your brain twitching up good so early...anyway, this fic is great!

Hey there! I loved your fic! I think you did a pretty good job keeping them in character. well...at least as much as you can with it being a WAFF. but yeah, if you're ever up during the "wee hours" again PLEASE maybe write a sequel_ haha I think it could be great! Pleased continue to write.

Awesome job! But why only a one-shot?

Pretty good. Now do the sequel where they share one umbrella. :)