...great story...
wish it had a epilogue or sequel though...nothing ever ends "happily ever after", there always is something at least somewhat troubling ;)

can't believe KyouxKagura pairing only has 5 pages out of such a large FF genre, all well...
-noian

this is good, just goes to show that if kyo pays attention to kagura she wont beat him up so much and he can see how nice she is.

Aww...that was so sweet! Cute story! =D

this was such a sweet story

Wahh it's over! Such a cute ending though i gott be honest I wasn't expecting Kagura to cry lol it is pretty understandable; she's been waiting forever just to hear those words. Nice kiss in the end!

this is such a wonderful story. great job!

Lovely ending to a lovely fic, although I wouldn't be opposed to an epilogue if you chose to do one. I like this fic because it covers the details of Kyou realizing his feelings; very sweet. You did an excelltn job on this!

Just so you know, "Pain ..." is currently up for Best Romance in the Neko Ino Diamond Awards, so you might want to head over and vote. Good luck!

Aww... that was so sweet! >_< Anyway, I did notice that you changed your pen name. ~_~ Maybe for the better? XD

::Releina Artemis::

AW! This chapter was the BEST! I loved the beginning so much! Kagura was so much in character. This was such a sweet ending! Please PLEASE make a sequel! I want to see what happens to them later!

~Violet

Oh My Gosh! Such a great chapter! I loved it! It's so adorable. The "new" Kyo part was adorable. GAh! Great job, and an epilouge could be good.

Kyaa! I'm gonna drown in cuteness! Your story is simplistic in a sense but it gently plays the strings of sweet love, a nice break from heavy duty drama. But mou how could you just leave us hanging?

OMG OMG OMG! He said that he loved her! Finally! lol omg you have to update! I wonder what Kagura says! That was funny in the bowling alley. I was laughing so much. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

~Violet

Aw! How adorable is that! Great job! You do a great job with the story and everything but you could add more narration with the conversation, and make the chapters longer, it moves the story along more and keeps the reader interested.

Why did I never think of the fact that hurling heavy balls at small objects would be the perfect date for Kyou and Kagura? Excellent idea there, and the cliffhanger! What's she going to say? I can't wait to find out! Great job, really great job.

Question: would you like your name to remain the same on Neko Ino or have it changed as well?

Oh my freaking boots! >__