wow...that's cool! and sad! and...and...wow...

i like it!

~hollybridgetpeppermint

Another great poem, rhymes wonderfully! :) Colfer, I'll never forgive you for killing off Root! (you know, I'm not particularly mad at Rowling for killing off Dumbly - I knew it would happen sooner or later; but Root's death was unnecessary and stupid, IMHO).

That was a very good rhyme scheme. However I'd recommend making it slightly less whimsical.

That was a very good rhyme scheme. However I'd recommend making it slightly less whimsical.

That was a very good rhyme scheme. However I'd recommend making it slightly less whimsical.

That was a very good rhyme scheme. However I'd recommend making it slightly less whimsical.

That was a very good rhyme scheme. However I'd recommend making it slightly less whimsical.

That was a very good rhyme scheme. However I'd recommend making it slightly less whimsical.

That was a very good rhyme scheme. However I'd recommend making it slightly less whimsical.

Me again. I know you already know it's me by just looking at who sent the review so I'm gonna stop saying that. Any way the poem was sad and a little sweet. it's just too bad Root died huh? :( Oh well, it's how Eoin wanted it to go. Super poem.

-gasp- thats so, so, SO sweet! I love that, I really do, you're good at writing poems^^ Be proud, be very proud.

-sniffles-

Eh, I know I'm sorta late reviewing, but I felt I had to. -grabs hankie box- Please tell me that you cried when he died too?

Great poem, you've got quite a talent! -runs away crying-

wow, so sad.

0_o The ending is a bit awkward to me. but its really good.

Great poem!