Oh, do tell, I would like to know. You like strange couplings don't you? But then, so do I. Anyway I can't say it wasn't unexpected, but I can say I'm glad you finished it the way you did and that it's pretty good. Jyou was...underdeveloped, but then, I suppose that's acceptable seeing this was the last chapter. Shinji,Vandemon,Taichi and Takeru were right on target. Sora was...different, Vahn was adorable and Hikari...well I think that she was maybe to err, docile. Jumping on Shinji and exclaiming her thanks is not exactly the greatest form of thanks she could have given, but then, that's me. Regardless, it's a very descriptive and actually very addictive drama, and I'm glad to have read it.

Great story

"blinks slowly" Jyou? Um Why? Any how good story! Kept us On the ege for a Wile though tnt.

That rocked I never had a clue who it was, you are a great writer. Please tell us how Jyou got like that, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE! (I've had a gigantic suger intake today and I'm hyper). You rock!

Are you planning on finishing this? It's really good. But the suspense is rather annoying. So could you add more anytime soon? Sorry if you find this annoying or such, I don't mean it to be.

Ge I need to know who the sick Bastered is! Hurry! By the wat this was good!

My,my, this is serious. Hikari better not be pregnant, that would screw everything up! But then, you're the writer, I'm just the reader. Please do finish this soon.

Who is it? You better finish this storie

"Mouth open" omg who did it i'll kill them! hurry up and get the rest out now! i'm going to kill the guy who did that to her! snarls i hate him poor kari-chan omg hurry i need to know what happens? is she going to have a baby? uncertnly i kinda hope she dose i think it'd help a bit! tnt see you later hurry!

Interesting language...but besides that I like it, in a weird way. Who did it? I must sound like a moron asking, but I don't know? Write the sequel please, just, could you ommit the bad words a bit more?

who raped her?

more please

*SNIFF* POOR Hikari. Wait till I find out who did this to her!

woah, more plz

Good story