 crimsonwolf333 2009-08-23 . chapter 1 please continue |
 Sarafu416 2006-08-06 . chapter 1O... seems interesting. So sad that it hasn't been updated for about a year though. Good story so far though! |
 DaysOfTheNight 2006-06-24 . chapter 1You MUST CONTINUE! Please?
*Close your eyes, and surrender to your darkest dreams*-Phantom Of The Opera |
 Redundant Goddess 2005-07-22 . chapter 1Interesting start. Not so sure about Gab, but an interesting beginning. A young walter eh? Keep it up, I'll be interested to see where this goes...
Pies! |
 LydiaColbat 2005-07-21 . chapter 1ok luvv the new guy so is there goin 2 b any pairs in this chapter |
 wankydoodle 2005-07-21 . chapter 1 And so the plot thickens...The first chapter builds up the suspense for what is yet to come. Everyone very much in character, which is a bonus. It's a good first chapter, and the cliffhang was perfect. Haha. You must update soon. But maybe it should by "Sir" instead of "Lady" Integra. Other than that, just keep up the good work. :) |