A pretty good story this is going on my favorites

I think this story has potential. True, there are some problems like the previous reviewer said, but your use of the English language and grammar is MUCH better than in most of the recent stories in this fandom.

The only thing that bothered me greatly was that you don't always start a new paragraph when a new person speaks. I used to do that too, and the format of this story reminds me of some of my own fic. :)

Also, a sentence followed by who said it ends in a comma. Like this, "This is weird," Jade said.

As for the plot, it's refreshing and I'm glad to see Valmont and his gang will be back in action. The first chapter was weird, it reminded me more of some mediaval fantasy story than JCA.

Actually, the one thing I don't really like in this story is Justine. I could go on and on about that, but I think it's enough if I say that she strikes me as a Mary Sue. Not necessarily a bad thing, just not something I'm looking for.

I hope you're not mad at me after this review. You seem like a mature person, so it would be sad to be proven otherwise. ;)

This story is WEIRD. I think you need to work on it. Your wrigiting isn't the best. I think you need to work on it. Maybe if you ask your english teacher at school to help you you can make it better and maybe you will even get extra credit for class. But I have to say it's good to see people trying.