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devoted99
2006-08-23
ch 4, anon.
abusehey, it's been awhile since the last update...
ramona
2006-05-04
ch 4, anon.
abuseHey this was great. Its good to see stories that involve sara with a splash of humour. Being that I watch and play street hockey ,I can relate to being aciddent prone.
dark-girl-faith-sidle
2006-03-25
ch 4,
abuseow! that must have hurt
it's funny that the last thing she thinks about is the puck.

I hope you'll update another chapter soon
Jenn Sidle
2005-09-24
ch 4,
abuseOw you left it off on a good part! I so can't wait to see what happens next!
icklebitodd
2005-08-25
ch 4,
abuseah poor sara made me chuckle though can't wait for more
remoob1513
2005-08-25
ch 4,
abuseI LIKE HER JEALOUSY TOWARDS CALLEIGH, WHEN GREG IS TALKING TO HER, THATS AWESOME. I HOPE SOMETHING REALLY GOOD HAPPENS BETWEEN THEM. I LIKE HOW MUCH YOU WENT INTO DETAIL, AND I KNOW IT TOOK A LONG TIME BUT YOU DID REALLY GOOD. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON? PLEASE?
remoob1513
2005-08-03
ch 3,
abusei hope i hope i hope, you finish this soon. i like the idea. please please please please please please please please please please please PLEASE UPDATE SOON? PLEASE?
Jenn Sidle
2005-07-31
ch 3,
abuseI love when Sara and Greg get togehter. I really could see something like this happening in the show! I know how Sara is feeling as well though. I love soccer alot and I play it with the guys from work and I last time I played with them I twisted my ankle really bad and I did not stop I kepted playing pertending that it did not hurt, but I sure paid for that one. I did not sleep at all that night because it hurt so bad. I had to go and get x-rays done the next day and I missed work for 3 days. Its sucked!

You are doing a great job with this story and I can't wait to read more!
LeaMarie F. Metallium
2005-07-28
ch 3,
abuseThat is too funny! Keep it up!
CDJ
2005-07-28
ch 3, anon.
abusekeep going, i'm loving this. can't wait to see how Sara's wrist is.
lemonjelly
2005-07-28
ch 3,
abusenice - very good update, i like it. all very happy and cute. could really imagine sara trying to fool greg with her uninjured wrist but being caught out. ha ha!
missusmesser
2005-07-27
ch 1,
abusePlease im going mad you have to update! and plus i cant review again cos ive done the max for these chapters so this is my last plea! im begging ya!
pesi
2005-07-20
ch 2,
abuseoh love the storey carn't wait for the next update : )
Gabrielle
2005-07-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseWhat happened to her wrist? keep going
remoob1513
2005-07-18
ch 2, anon.
abusei like this chap hope theres more like it to come, great story. update soon? keep writing!
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