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| BlueXPinkX21 2008-08-27 ch 1,  | abuseOMG!! THIS IS AWESOME!! UPDATE SOON!! |
| tori 2008-06-15 ch 14, anon. | abusehi! great story, its sad its discontinued though... i really want 2 know what happens, i'd be awesome if u wrote a couple more chapters... seriously u should consider it. |
| ApplelovesApple 2008-04-22 ch 11, | abuselove it update soon please |
| abriel 2008-01-13 ch 12, | abusetime to update bring on chapter 15 |
| NeferNeferi 2007-12-30 ch 14, | abuseThis story is great! I love it as well. I'll patiently wait for your next update; it's worth it! As for criticism, I say the same thing that I said in my review of your other story. It's still good though! Please update soon! |
| XXRedWolfXX 2007-12-29 ch 14, | abuseI like it! I hope You can continue! |
| HereRtears4U 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseUmm...not sure if you noticed but the height and weights for the characters are kind of...off. Technically, they'd all be underweight for their ages and they're supposed to be taller. But aside from that, great story. You should continue writing. |
| abriel 2007-12-15 ch 14, | abusei can't wait to know what is going to happen next. |
| SnowCharms 2007-10-07 ch 14, | abuse!@#$%...darn right u're not gonna throw this away! It's definitely a good story...but the arrangement and time skip is a little confusing...update! |
| Cnguyen456 2007-08-20 ch 14, | abuseGreat story, and hopefully you have some inspiration or something htat will take this story off of hiatus. xD |
| Cnguyen456 2007-08-20 ch 2, | abuseLol, he pressed her face more into the dirt. I was laughing hard at that sentence. xD great chapter |
| 7nmelz 2007-08-01 ch 9, | abuseHee! Yay! I don't mind 'beta-ing' your work (if you haven't found a someone already). Because, honestly, I am one of those few people that like grammar. I'm actually proof-reading three other friends' works, but I check my e-mail every day and I usually manage to finish in less than around two days. So, if you haven't found somebody already, please contact me soon!! :D |
| 7nmelz 2007-08-01 ch 8, | abuseIsn't veal deer? Oh, never mind, I might be mistaken. :) |
| kawaii-firestar 2007-06-28 ch 14, | abuseI LOVE this story! Your writing is so detailed and this idea is the most original one I've seen! I can't wait until you've undiscontinued this story. Okay that sounded weird. Bye! |
| xladykittyx 2007-04-08 ch 14, | abusegreat story! |